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Title: Sixteen

Another good chatper! I really think it's Marcus but who knows.  I'm glad Jarod came back and Miss Parker sonewhat forgave him but I hope she is ok.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 05:50 am
Title: Sixteen

Still my favorite story.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/09 11:42 pm
Title: Sixteen

Please ,write more!!! This chapter was great!

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/09 12:30 pm
Title: Sixteen

Okay, I admit I missed sending a few responses and profusely apologize (real life and all that)....but that was some chapter! Very intense, fun, and well written.

 BUT!! i hate cliff hangers... the kind that leave you blowing in the wind desparately hoping that you can hold on to the rope.  This was one of those type of ch's. You really did a good job of it too!

Please don't make us wait too long. This story is well done and I've looked forward to each chapter. I hope things fall back into some sense of order and I can become the "good reader" that reads everything and responds. Until then please know that I am reading and I am enjoying! 

 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/09 03:15 am
Title: Sixteen

Chapters 15&16 where great! Best chapters as of yet. I hope the next chapters will be as good or even better! Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

Oh now I am not feeling pressured at all. Just kidding. :-D

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: whisper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/01/09 05:29 pm
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