Great ending! I wonder, did her towel slip during that super hot kiss? ;)
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 28/04/10 08:07 am
Slap him, kiss him and then make a run for it wearing nothing but a towel. I loved it.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/12/08 11:16 pm
Why do you always choose to stop at the best moment? I want to know what's next!!! loved this chapter, in particular the end, Jarod's try at romantism (how daring he is) , Parker's panic and their kiss!!! of course, i loved the end as weel, with parker leaving still wrapped in a towel!lol want to read more!!! a lot more!
Reviewer: Faith Parker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/12/08 01:47 pm
I have enjoyed every word of this story. You presented the characters in a true to form manner, the twist in the mystery ... that I think is still twisting! and of course the ultimate treasure is the touch of romance and humor. As dark as the show was at times it always had a touch of humor, either in the form of Parker's sacrcasm, Broots' strange friends and comments or Jarod's practical jokes and innocence.
A true Pretender story. Thank you for a nice moment after getting a flat tire in the freezing cold you warmed me inside out.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/12/08 05:33 am
I'm glad that they found Amanda and that she was alright but Miss. Parker can't leave now. First I want them to figure out who is behind all of this and secondly, she has to stay to figure out what is going on between her and Jarod. That kiss was soooo Parker!
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Quita Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 15/12/08 04:43 am
