This doesn't sound good for our Pretender! He's most definitely in for a not so good time with Lyle AND Alex.
Again, great job! Again, no seams the storylines from each author are melded very well together.
Can't wait to see what's next!
Poor little genius boy, no one ever leaves him alone *sighs*. But there might be trouble brooing for someone else too...*then shuts up*
- ManolineReviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/05/08 01:18 am
Poor Jarod, back in Lyle's hands and with Alex as the evil sidekick no less! I foresee trouble for the near future.
Very well written, you all get into the characters' heads so well.
I'm waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter.
Thanks for the (im)patience Cathy. New chapter will be arriving shortly
- ManolineReviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/05/08 07:39 pm