Your interactions between Miss Parker and Lyle are "spot on" character-wise. I love the snark between the two of them which is one of the main reasons that I loved this show to begin with. I can't say that I'm surprised that Mr Parker is still alive. I've always believed that his "sacrifice" out the door of the plane was complete bs. He simply had 'other' plans for those scrolls.
The interaction between Miss Parker and Jarod has me a litte curious though. There was so much tension and words not spoken that I'm dying to know what lead up to J's capture. Great story....I'm hurrying on to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks again TessaD!
That was one of my favourite elements to the show too, so I'm chuffed to hear that you've enjoyed my take on their little quarrels! And hopefully all will be revealed in regards to the Jarod/Miss Parker... situation... shortly.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: TessaD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/06/08 08:34 pm
Very good. I really liked it and can't wait to see the rest of it. According to your first post this is your first fanfic, i wouldn't have even noticed if you wouldn't have said so yourself. Very well done. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the compliments (and 5 stars) Maria! Yes this is my first attempt at writing fanfic (of any sort), which is probably the reason I'm so paranoid about getting reviews lol
So thanks heaps for reading and reviewing, I really, really appreciate it!
Reviewer: Maria Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/05/08 05:24 pm
I really like how this story is developing, and you are a fantastic writer! I like how you take time to talk about small details, like Jarod's high flashback etc, because that is what makes the story real and so true to the show we all love.
I cannot wait for the next chapter. Excellent work :)
Author's Response:
Yay it's so nice to hear from you again KatieQ!
...And to have yet another silly-grin inspiring review is almost as great ; )
I've just posted (or am about to post) the next chapter so hopefully it will not disappoint!
Thanks for your time, your two reviews have been awesome muse feeding material!
Reviewer: KatieQ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/05/08 03:26 pm
Hey, great chapter. Even better than the first one. Loved it. You captured the characters well. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks again whashaza : ) it's really great to get two reviews from somebody!!
...And here was I, paranoid that everyone would think that I butchered the characters...
Thanks for the reviews. You're awesome!
Reviewer: whashaza Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/05/08 11:00 am
great story!!
Keep writing!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your time Angelina. Its great to hear that you’re enjoying this!
Reviewer: angelina Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/05/08 11:12 pm
