Title: Chapter 1

Hi just read your story it was very good. I Love that Miss Parker know it was Jarod all a long.

Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/14 07:19 am
Title: Chapter 1

Not exactly how I know conventions but cute anyway :)

Reviewer: CHris Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/05/08 07:15 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh, my, did that make me laugh!  (which I sooo needed today) Thanks so much!

Miss P was pitch perfect and I could so clearly see Sydney observing everything about him with interest...heehee...

[I also curse you, though, because now a very vague story is forming in the back of my mind involving the Klingon princess... ;)  ]



Author's Response:

I keep forgetting this option is available here!

 I'm glad you enjoyed this token offering. I loved your take on it. It was much more detailed and so sci-fi! good job.

Reviewer: wormie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/08 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 1

I was big into Trek years ago, so finding this story was a treat. I'm intrigued by your choice of characters for the chase team. You made them work but I wonder why you didn't go with Capt Jameway?  and Felix for Broots. I guess there are endless possibilities. 

the point is that you made it work. i can picture parker reacting like that, as well as the others. can even see jarod being slightly put out that she caught on. but i have to wonder what would have happened had she not caught on.

would you consider another part? would the night go on or would you do the day after? 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind review. I can't imagine anyone that never watched Trek (excluding my mother and sister in law- they just hates science ficition period. ).

I like making Parker the one that upsets the apple cart. The one that Jarod or Lyle thinks they have so easily pegged and she had them the whole time.

Not sure about another part, although I do appreciate that you would ask for it. If I did it would be the day after and dealing with the internet pics that Jarod would be too happy to send her. 

 

 

Reviewer: Lucy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/05/08 11:23 pm
Title: Chapter 1

hehehehe, now that was an enjoyable read. Poor Jarod. He really should not underestimate his warrior princess.

Author's Response: Exactly my point. Parker is too underestimated in my opinion. So it was fun to turn the tables on Jarod for once. Thank you for taking the time for the review!

Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/05/08 07:04 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I'm the first to review? I thought it was hilarious. I was into a couple of the Trek series enough to know most of your references. Which I thought fit so perfectly to the story!

Very imaginative, so you too were into Trek. I guess most people were to some degree at some point. They had..what 4 or 5 different series and 11 going on 12 movies. Hard to have missed all of that. Especially if you are into Sci fi even a little bit.  

 

This was funny. I wish you would have continued it a bit more. We didn't get to see Broots with Sydney's ears!  And it would have been fun to see them the next day back at the Centre. Of course dressed in their outfits not everyone would quickly equate them with the pictures on the internet. Seeing Parker's response to the one of Jarod or Worf carring her in a backwards fireman style carry would have been amusing. 

 

Can we go for a three in a series?   come on Bucky, it's fun to read these! It started my day off with a smile.

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it nightowl. You are the one that always encourages me to "write it!".  Something I never thought I do was write a fanfiction!

 

Thanks for you push. 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/05/08 04:15 pm


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