here be the neglected story without continuance.
Author's Response: Sorry Katie, that was my bad, I have been very busy and I forgot to update. It has been updated now and it is a longer chapter so i hope that helps and that you like it :D
Date: 18/09/08 04:40 am
i like this story a lot.
i don't know about castles.
but i know i like little jarod.
and i know i don't like lyle.
please post another chapter.
thank you for taking away those nasty figures i had to type before submitting a review. i hate numbers. but i love sea grass.
love, georgia
Author's Response: lol thank georgia, yay for our top PTB for removing numbers and i hope you gt some more se grass. anothr chap has been psoted for you and topanga to read and I'm sorry you didn't like lyle. Reviewer: Topanga Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/08/08 01:32 am
yea (no 'y') another chap. very enjoyable reading. love your protrayal of sydney and his internal dialogue - perfection ladies. interaction btwn. the kids is good too. also really like the subtle use of humor. the wimpiness of jarod seems a tad overdone. no need for mp to feel bad for jarod; he would have barely been out of diapers w/his parents - what toddler goes out and makes friends? one last suggestion: the story is moving v e r y slowly at this point. so when you take a long time to post between chapters and then the chapters are also short, it leaves the reader without much substance. how about combining two chaps together next time? once again, it is a creative tale quite fun to read.
Author's Response: hey, glad you like the protrayal of Sydney, that is Jacci's doing and she has done a very good job on it. Thanks for all your other comments, as for the story moving slowly, sorry about that, sometimes they just go through their slow patches. The following chapters are longer and with any luck you enjoy them more and find it isnt so slow. Thanks for the review :D Reviewer: topanga Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/08 01:00 am
Another very good chapter that opens a whole new dimension of secret passageways... so like the Centre! and what trouble will these two get into with them.
I'm looking forward to another adventure in this story. Thank you all for your hard work.
Author's Response: Thankyou for the feedback nightowl, im glad you liked the chapter. I liked the thought of the passage ways, castles did have them after all, and well, they resemble the vents in the Centre. More Chaps have been posted for your enjoyment. Thanks for reviewing! Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/06/08 05:10 pm
another great chapter! it is so classic and flows so nicely. I love how you have paralled the roles between 'now' and 'back then' it's really quite smart.
i'm looking forward to when the real drama-rama starts!
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review Katie :D It's nice to know you think it is a good chap, yay us lol. And dont worry, some drama-rama is on its way. Thanks again :D Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/06/08 04:47 pm
