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Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wow! I'm so pleased with the "random" stories- they've been anything BUT random. BUT I'm quite displease as well, because it seems that all of the best fics are incomplete.

This fic is quite remarkable, extremely well written and with that ominous fog hanging over it. You've certainly painted quite the picture with your descriptions and details.

48 hours? That is so like Alex, so taunting, so evil and giving just enough time that, I fear, it won't be time enough for Jarod to save her, one of those "just in time to be too late" situations.

This has to be, hands down, the most evil cliff hanger in the history of literature, be it fanfic, fic, nonfic, etc. Please update.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 10:19 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Another hanging plot, come was just starting to sound good. Hopefully, this gets a continuation.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/12/09 07:47 am
Title: Chapter 1

Great! You certainly got me hooked! Please more!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/08/09 01:29 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, interested in reading more. Nice job, bringing Alex back. No one ever really dies in The Pretender, after all.

Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/06/09 06:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Eep! I hope you're planning on writing more; that's a truly evil cliffhanger.

Reviewer: Doranwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/10/08 09:18 pm
Title: Chapter 1

What a great start - you've got me hooked.  I hope you continue with this story...

Reviewer: JLC Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/08 03:01 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I think I read this before, possibly on FFN?  I am enjoying it and hope you continue. You have certainly started it off with a bang!

I like the premise and your characterizations. The end of this chapter will ensure I'm back for the next one!


Good job. 


Author's Response: Yes, I was posting on :)

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/08 10:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

Really nice beginning!!

Can't wait to read more!!


I hope it will be soon, and that you're not going to let us starve to death! lol

Reviewer: Angelina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/08 09:25 am
Title: Chapter 1

WOW!!!  What a great start to this story .... you certainly have grabbed my attention with this!! So professionally written ...well done!

Absolutely great characterisation ...great story line ....perfect!!  PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE SOON !!!!

Absolutely love this !!

Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/08 05:22 am
Title: Chapter 1

Very nice start! You write with great detail. I look forward to reading more chapters :)

Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/03/08 09:41 pm
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