Shame this isn't complete but I love it.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 25/02/18 01:46 am
Loved this when you writing it, always hoped you would finish the story.
Have a great Christmas!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/12 08:54 pm
Loved this when you writing it, always hoped you would finish the story.
Have a great Christmas!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/12 08:54 pm
That waa a remarkable move (the drug) and Parker, of course, played it so cool, as did Syd. But poor Jarod and Gem, left behind and concerned. It's a remarkable story, a lovely tale and you extremely well written.
You can't leave it like this- well, you can, but I'd really rather you didn't, haha.
I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter, nightowl, when ever you're ready.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed




Date: 02/06/11 01:07 am
Hi
I, like probably a lot of f.f. readers, would love to think that you still had this story locked away somewhere waiting to be finished.I loved the story and hoped maybe oneday you find the time and motivation to finish it.
Thanks
Deb Australia
Reviewer: Deb Australia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/04/11 02:58 am
I love the the story it is great. You write a thrilling story I coudn't stop reading. I Can't wait to read the next part.
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 03:12 am
Dear Miss Typo Queen,
games are afoot and i am dying to see it all unfold. More, please!
Sincerely,
Mary
Reviewer: bloodymary2 Signed



Date: 25/04/10 06:30 pm
This is great so far! Can't wait for more on this storyline. The island would be something to see as one of the series storylines. This would be a very good addition to the series.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous





Date: 23/04/10 02:21 am
I hope you still have this story in your head and intend to complete it at some stage. It is a great read.....
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/10/09 09:17 am
Well, what can I say, a friend told me about this story and it lived up to their opinion. But I was so totally disappointed when it ended as it did. I looked at the date and realized it has been a while since you added. I hope you will be finishing it. It screams for an ending. I scream for an ending!
Please!
Reviewer: Mr Bill Anonymous





Date: 04/07/09 05:41 am
I am so glad you decided to update this fabulous story. Quite a page turner you've got here. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Update soon.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 02:00 am
you know every time I shave I keep thinking that Parker owes Jarod for the leg shaving, as much as I enjoyed that scene I'd like to see the Parker return the gesture. I'd like to see if you can make that scene as sensuous as the leg shaving one.
The story is very entertaining for so many different aspects that it is like an addiction to me. Keep writing. I know you said the last chapters are the hardest but you must continue!
Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous




Date: 30/11/08 01:55 am
This was so worth the wait !!!!!! I loved this chapter and finished with a tear in my eye!!! So much emotion !
I really like where you are taking this story - more soon, please!!!!
PS I'm really NOT bothered about the very small number of typo errors - and neither should you!!!!
I'm so, so, pleased you're back with this!!!!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous





Date: 26/11/08 01:33 pm