I listen to Dan Folgerberg all the time. Love him. It's so sweet all the little notes at the top with the lyrics. Rabbit Island. Yes. Teh bunny. lol you are not a typo queen. I'm enjoying this alott. "Do real women need to jump in front of bullets?" Whoa. Tense.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 25/02/18 12:25 am
All choked up after that scene. That little boy is so precious questioning Parker about her own life choices, he's just like Jarod, "it's okay to cry", that was so sweet, nightowl.
Oh, and Rabbit Island. Good one, nightowl. The story is progressing beautifully and naturally.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/06/11 04:45 am
HI! I am enjoying the story and hope that you will continue. It seems that the only time Miss Parker feels she can let her guard down is when she a world away from the Centre. Please write more when you have a chance! Thanks!
Twingirl10
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/01/08 09:23 pm
this story is just getting better and better!... and hotter :o) and that's always a good thing :o)
can't wait to read more.
peace!
Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/01/08 02:02 am
Hey!!
It was great seeeing an update so soon. Loved the chapter!! And yes, Rabbit Island seems too fitting (so good that it's surprising it was not made up.)...
Thank you for explaining the difference between Jem and Gem (I really loved it; MP gave the name a certain unique twist to it). Also, I loved the name you picked for MP. It was really original and I am almost certain that you are the first one to use it.
Loved, above all else, because I am a shameless shipper who is not afraid to own up to it, the way you are slowly but surely evolving the relationship between Jarod and MP. I loved that they are meeting halfway, both having to give a little (compromise is the key here!!).
Now... How long will this peace remain? Is a storm lingering in the distance? Your cliffhanger, perhaps? Will you follow the original storyline and have Mr. Parker use his child with Brigitte to reasert his position? What is the truth with that kid anyway? They never explained it and I always found his 'importance' to be highly suspicious (didn't you?), especially since he 'disappeared' later on.
Anyway, sorry if I babbled a little. Loved the chap and hope to see more whenever is possible.
Mary
PS:I didn't find any typos, so cudos to your beta (if you make them as much as you say you do)
Reviewer: bloodymary2 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/08 12:02 pm
I have to say you surprised me with this chapter. In some ways you seem to be tying up the loose pieces but on the other hand there is still a lot to be settled. Nice cliffhanger of an ending.
I think you are enjoying this more than you thought you would, I hope so. I'm enjoying it, that way I'd get more! ;-P
[Report This]Date: 22/01/08 06:54 am
