I can't wait for more on this plot! It's just getting to the heart of a great story. More updates!Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/10 07:29 am
Ooh, I like this. Who's trying to resurrect the Centre? Why do they need Miss Parker? Will Jarod meet up with them? I want to know--you've got to write more!Reviewer: Doranwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/10/08 04:48 pm
Yes, yes, update, your story really looks promising!
After staying out of the Pretender fandom for seven years, I've finally come back and discovered TP fan fiction :) It's really strange to read TP fics, as I've only ever read HP fanfics before.
I hope you will update, and ultimately finish this story, because it is so difficult to find good TP fics, as it is a much smaller fandom than HP, for example.Reviewer: Mia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/02/08 07:32 pm
I only have time to read ONE fan fic, (sigh, life right now is so unfair!) so I picked yours. Nice to catch up on another chapter. Chapter 5 flows very nicely and you left us hanging (as I know you had every intention of doing!) It'll be interesting to see where you take us from here. Nice work! Well done. Pass my praise on to your Muse, it's well deserved.Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/01/08 06:55 pm
Hi! I hope that you will write more soon. I am anxious to see how the story unfolds and who the mystery man is that wants to resurrect the center. Mr. Parker? Lyle? Raines? Can't wait.
TwingirlReviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/01/08 11:25 pm
Love it! Just love itReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/01/08 08:04 pm
Reviews? You dare to ask for reviews???? How long has it been? And to think I had to take a break from reading Pretender stories before your Muse decided to grace us with another wonderful chapter.
Other then that this was nicely done and I am lookjing forward to more. I'll toss a few soft centered chocolates and thornless roses your way for now but wait too long and I'll grab a sharp pointy stick and give your Muse a good prod!Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/07 11:08 pm
This is a story I've always wanted to see written. You are doing a good job with it, I look forward to seeing more. Soon I hope.Reviewer: Nightowl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/11/07 09:41 pm
I haven't checked this site in awhile but boy am I glad I stopped by now. *This* is an awesome story. I like absolutely everything so far. I especially like that even though The Centre, the organization, is gone; the evil that grew within it still lives on. Congrats and I hope that you continue this story.Reviewer: Tessa D Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/11/07 02:46 pm
WooHoo! I love it! Need I say more and it's great. Can't wait for another chapter .... which BTW.... had better be coming soon or I'll have to pull out my pointy stick and borrow Kat's stun gun and have a talk with your Muse.Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/07 05:37 pm
great writing. it's getting really interesting.
can't wait to read more :o)
peace!Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/10/07 07:24 am
This is such a great story. I like how you teased us with thinking Jarod would find and stay with Miss Parker so soon. Your characterization is some of the best I've ever read. Can't wait for more! :)Reviewer: Slowly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/10/07 01:29 am
I love this story! Jared chasing Parker, it doesn't get better than that. I would have loved for more jared/parker interaction though. Keep it coming.Reviewer: mpj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/10/07 01:21 pm
I like the start of this. Can't wait to read more! :^)
Twingirl10Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/10/07 11:26 am
Great chapter! I hope you'll be updating pretty soon.Reviewer: goldentail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/10/07 08:13 am
Hope to read more quickly!!Reviewer: Carla Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/10/07 07:28 am