Reviews For Flight of Memory
Title: The Price of Solace

YAAAAAAY, an update!!

Of course, not so 'yaaay' for Jarod, but I have faith in you that you'll make everything all right eventually.  *nods*



Author's Response:

Why thank you!  I hope chapter 9 doesn't do too much to disabuse you of that faith--there is a plan in motion.  Hopefully, I'll have it all written and revealed before my audience dies of old age . . .

Thanks for your support!

Reviewer: Taryn Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/09/08 12:23 am
Title: The Price of Solace

Great Story! I love how you show the internal struggle in Parker and her "reasoning". I read the whole thing in one sitting and couldn't stop. Please update soon, can't wait to see how this all turns out.

Author's Response: Wow!  Thanks for the great review.  It's great to see that this stuff is appreciated.  Chapter 9 is up, and further chapters should be coming soon.  Hope you keep reading!

Reviewer: Shadow Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/08 05:46 am
Title: The Price of Solace

yay, an update. ;-) Verrry good, as Sydney would say. You managed to capture Jarod's angst and then final acceptance really well. The conflict of MP and Sydney was also clear to see. Loved the chapter. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks, whashaza!  I'll try not to disappoint.  I know this is the millionth time I've said this, but updates really should be more frequent from here on out.

Reviewer: whashaza Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 09:20 am
Title: The Price of Solace

oh MP! What a fantastic chapter. Welcome back :)

 

The whole Syd/J interaction was perfect. It really underlines what probably should have happened between those two characters years and years and years ago.

 

You wrote it brilliantly, and i cannot wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response: Thanks!  It's good to be back.  I'm glad you liked the Syd/J bit.  It was tough to orchestrate, but it's also the real reason I'm writing this story.  Thanks for another great review!

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/08 05:59 pm
Title: The Price of Solace

Ohh sniffers, you made me cry, bad bad you!!!

That scene with Sydney and Jarod was so good. I hate what is happening to Jarod, it is making me feel ill at the unbelievable violation, which far outdoes all the previous ones (and that is really saying something). You have captured the moods and nuances perfectly and I love how torn but determined Parker is.

Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response: This is coming two weeks late, but . . . have a tissue.  Thanks for the support, the plugs, and the great review.  It's good to know I'm doing something right.

Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/08 04:33 pm


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