Very well done! I enjoyed the journey. Of course, I hate the ending that isn't really an ending. That's why I haven't written anything myself for a while; I have a hard time with endings!
Please indulge one nitpicky momen: noone is two words, no one. I wouldn't mention it, but it shows up a lot and I thought you should know.
At any rate, I'm eagerly awaiting the new series!
-ErinReviewer: Erin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/07/07 09:46 pm