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Title: Part 1
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Date: 13/01/10 05:09 am
This is a...stupid story. By stealing Lyle's daughter from him, that makes Jarod no better than the Centre. You've now made Jarod, just as bad as those he professes to hate. Nice move.
Reviewer: AcaciaJules Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/10 05:09 am
