Hmmm, see response to Jazzy in my previous review. I'm not being critical, just that it seems to be out of character for MP, unless you want to explain "why " she's taken this drastric change of direction. It is your story and reality and I do enjoy it.
But e-mail me with your next chapter if you want some light beta-ing (spelling, grammer etc only.) Don't expect any input or trying to influence your story. I have problems of my own since I signed up for the next Sleepyhead chapter after Sarah.
rachell7@yahoo.com
Author's Response:
Hi RaChell!
Thanks so much. Well, my story has come to an end with Chapter 6, soon to be posted. I wrote this on a dare. One of the writers at Fanfiction said I couldn't do it. Well, read on. And there will be a sequel to this story.
Again, thank you.
Anna
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/06/07 03:37 pm
