right on! i love it! it's so intense :o)

and you're right Ra Chell.  I also think it's time for Jarod to suffer a little... because he can be sooo stubborn sometimes :o)...but i still think he wouldn't be able to really hurt Miss P.

regarding this chapter (no. 4), I think that Miss P. would never come back once she'd left. she's too proud for that... even if it's real love and suffering in question. but.. hmmm.. who knows... maybe she would... for Jarod...

conclusion... they're both sooo stubborn... that's what makes them so interesting :o)

can't wait for more :o)

cheers!