Ok so I'm trying to get my head around this but I was warned it was twincest and I'm not so closeminded. I did ship them for a while before I knew he was her brother lol. They are nice together. I'm a Jarod girl but I get Lyle's appeal.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/04/16 03:12 am
Wow. Parker's behavior. I wonder what's going on...
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 03:10 am
It's very understandable the reasons why Lyle does what Lyle does and it really isn't his fault if he is the way he is. Jarod could have been evil too and still could. All the red files are susceptible to violence.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 03:09 am
My only complaint is teh chapters are too short. But I love this.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 02:04 am
Wooooo a new charge for Sydney. Oh squeeeee !
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 02:03 am
I think the pointy stick people should come back. Until then I have my own pokey stick and I'm wagging it at you guys. But I will read this anyway even if it isn't finished.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/16 02:02 am
I know this is probably falling on deaf ears after all this time ... but FINISH IT. You were just getting to the good part. Excellent Cox story
Reviewer: MarieL Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/10/13 07:14 pm
Aw *groans* no, it's not finished. Any plans for a continuation ever?
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 06:49 am
Oh, bless. I think I'm developing a slight crush on Mr. Cox, he's so gentle with Kainda, it's terribly sweet. Perhaps he will ally with the twins?
Date: 21/06/11 06:46 am
Karina should be shot. Soon. Poor Lyle.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 06:35 am
Ooh, me likes the scuffle between the ladies (cat fight!) and I love that Cox sided with Parker and that Parker kindly retracted the claws. Well played.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 06:30 am
Ooh, very nice steamy scenes!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 06:13 am
You write them so well, ahh. Love it.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 06:10 am
Oh, dear! Jarod is rabid and confused as hell- my favorite! The more confused, the better. Will he find out about Parker and Lyle's exploits? Yes? Can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 06:07 am
Oooh and the plot continues to thicken, hmm, delicious. I do love how intuitve Cox is and how he isn't completely evil and not even close to being the "grim reaper" - no more than Lyle is the "boogy man" as Raines had dubbed him (which is odd for Raines considering that Raines is the one that screwed Lyle's mind). Great job.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 06:01 am
Heart in throat excitement. Whew, that was close with Raines, Lyle and Parker. So glad she's able to control Lyle and yes, indeed, she is fascinating- and so is your writing.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 05:53 am
What the hell is Raines doing to Lyle? Make it stop! Very intriguing still. I simply can't stop reading.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 05:40 am
Uh-oh, Jarod's foaming at the mouth, haha. This doesn't bode well for Parker's beauty sleep. I should sleep but this is much more interesting.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 05:32 am
Smooth talking Cox, the voice of reason. I love how seamlessly this flows and how alive this story and the characters are. And no typos! Incredible.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 05:27 am
And the Pretender is in the house, and a little slow on the uptake as usual, which is very characteristic of the resident genius indeed. He never seems to know enough, always gets there just in time to be late, etc. You really know these characters, thunderchild.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 05:23 am
Oh, love the idea of triggers implanted an early age but oh, I do hope Lyle doesn't kill her.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 05:18 am
That was absolutely naughty, haha, and they bugged each other's homes. I loved it, haha.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 05:16 am
Oh, God, she really is Parker's child? Perhaps? And the father? Eww, not Jarod's, I hope.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 05:02 am
I love this side of Cox, which, I'm sure exists. He is a son to his father on the show, so naturally he has paternal potential- or at the very least, the ability to feel adoration for a child. But still, he's creepy, haha. You do a great job balancing the personalities, and beyond the surface and exposing confilicts and insecurities. Magnificent.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 04:56 am
