Hot. I like your steam and hope there will be more in this. Good job.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:19 pm
lol 'Cuz you cheated' lol They are so cute together. I love this story.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 10:47 pm
Wow. I lovve it.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 10:28 pm
OMG! Wow. I am so beyond
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:52 pm
Cool that She doubted Sydney because really he hides things from her. It may be for her own good but it's still a lie.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:43 pm
Cool that She doubted Sydney because really
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:43 pm
LOL 'Prince Charming is at your service.' Jarod is a charming man.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:41 pm
Good. It's a revelation that Parker would admit that she is scared of what she feels for Jarod. They were always so forbidden.
Yummy fruit.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:29 pm
I don't know. I think Jarod is that kind of man. He always had sex with other women and didn't really think ahead. If you look at him with Zoe , he went to the profiler in a cross over and slept with Rachel and then boomeranged back to Zoe. Zoe had cancer during that time. Jarod is promiscuous. but I like that you changed him.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:26 pm
Ughhh. I hate Lyle. It's his sister and I always hated the way he treated her.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:22 pm
Ughhh. I hate Lyle.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:21 pm
Getting really exciting. I always thought Broots would get in trouble.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:11 pm
I think it's so cool that Sydney had some funny lines in this. He's always so serious. Parker is head strong and she seems hard to write. She always acts more tough than she is. It's well done.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:04 pm
my review didn't show up completely so I will try again.
But that she is headstrong and
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:02 pm
Cool that Sydney has some funny lines and he is
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:01 pm
In keeping with the tv series. I like it. I don't like the The Return or the other novels written by the creators or sourced out to fans or family of the creators or people who don't know the show at all. So it's something that I found three authors I really enjoy here.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 09:00 pm
He IS here. lol. Good.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 08:56 pm
Liked it. I have to ignore the typos and grammatical issues. When you first start in English it can be hard. Your story is good enough that I can overlook the many exlamation marks.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/02/17 08:53 pm
MP was right to not trust Sid...
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/17 03:19 am
3 days.... 3 more chapters.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/17 03:18 am
This chapter seemed more rounded out nicely.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/17 03:17 am
The sex was more detailed and really good.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/17 03:15 am
MP and fire like peanut butter and jelly. I like this so much. So interesting.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/17 03:12 am
