Man... dang it's not finished. Disappointing.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 08:47 pm
Hi I love this story to I hope you write more chapters soon? I would love to see how Jarod gets put of this.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/12/14 07:15 am
This is one of the few stories here that concentrated on the Triumvirate's cruelty and accomodations as being dark and hopeless. Interesting, yet it is a good read. If any plans on a sequel is forthcoming or is still in the works then I'm one of the many that's waiting patiently for another ride on this plot.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/02/10 07:27 pm
This story is awesome!! And in a desperate need of more chapters ;)!!!!
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/09/09 09:26 pm
Wow! I love it! You are an excellent wiriter! Please, please, please continue this!!! Bring Jarod out of Africa!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/08/09 11:57 am
Very good story! Please continue it!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/04/09 02:51 pm
Wow! Great story! And I also like your style very much. Please post another chapter soon!!!
Reviewer: lo000 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/08 07:20 am
Gah! I want to know what happens next. How's Jarod going to get out of this one now?
Reviewer: Doranwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/10/08 05:54 pm
10 stars aren't high enough to rate this one with KatieQ! Sorry but unless Jacci changes things it'll have to do. Nice job and tense. Like the part with Miss Parker, and Lyle is so predictable. LOL!
Now if only you could post another chapter before Real Life turns to hell .... well I'm sure I'm not the only one biting my nails. Hurry up or I'll have stubs for fingers.
[Report This]Date: 23/09/08 07:21 am
10 stars aren't high enough to rate this one with KatieQ! Sorry but unless Jacci changes things it'll have to do. Nice job and tense. Like the part with Miss Parker, and Lyle is so predictable. LOL!
Now if only you could post another chapter before Real Life turns to hell .... well I'm sure I'm not the only one biting my nails. Hurry up or I'll have stubs for fingers.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/09/08 07:20 am
Oh, thank you, thank you! I've been checking for updates for awhile now (I understand the real life delays - no worries) and was thrilled to see you posted one. W0oT!
Reviewer: Taryn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/09/08 12:41 am
Boy I must have missed a chapter or two KatieQ! None of the summary sounds familiar! I'll have to go back and re-read before I can give you a decent review. But hey, if my posting a story is the only way to get you to post more of this one .... well I'll have to bite the bullet and crank out another one.
Just kidding, good to see you still have a fire under this one.
Author's Response: Nice to hear from you as always.. have fun catching up. If I get more stories out of the deal.. then so be it! No complaints from this kid! Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 06:19 am
Whoa . . .
This one was definitely worth the wait. I love how you showed almost all the characters--tensions mounting, plots going awry on both sides of the Atlantic. You gave us great emotional analysis of both Parker and Jarod. I loved the Carthis flashback. (Been too long since I've seen IotH, was that canon or a "missing scene"? Either way, it was perfectly executed). Also, great climax to months of speculation over Visser.
Sooo . . . next chap? I know RL can be crazy, but hopefully you can find the time.
Author's Response: I'll keep up the good fight.. thesis vs fun :) The IotH bit was a missing created scene.. that movie frustrates me ;) I'm glad you enjoyed, and i cannot wait to read your next installment :) Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/08 04:36 am
