GUtwrenching.
Reviewer: Barb Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/08/18 08:08 pm
I'm trying to decide if I hate Henrik or pity him. Hopefully going through so much of Jarod's pretends will lead to a grand plot to mislead Dr Klaus and escape with Jarod and Lys... here's hoping!
Keep it coming! I'm loving Miss P starting to figure out her feelings for Jarod in her feelings for Jay.
Author's Response:
Hey!!
Don't be to harsh with Henrik... he doens't know any better. Thank you so much for the feedback * 2. We'll see how things progress. Exams are finally over so lots of writing time.. and lots of time for MP to keep developing those so-called feelings. Thanks again =)
Reviewer: Beka Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/04/07 11:25 pm
Intense as ever! I really enjoyed the part with Gemini and Miss Parker, Syd and Broots. Very nicely done. I'm looking forward to seeing how she interacts with Gemini and if she sorts out her feelings for Jarod in the process.
And of course I want to wring Henrik's little neck for screwing over Lys and Jarod. ;) I hope he gets a taste of the hell he's put these two thru. You do such a good job of bring the characters to life.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked the MP/Jay/Syd/Broots part.. I was so unsure about it, and Jacci can back me up that we had many debates over it.
Poor Henrik.. everyone hates him.. feel a little sympathy for the little guy... lol.
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/07 08:19 pm
