Oh, wow! You've captured J's welcoming MP into a shared life is so profound! 'hey hey'... so unlike MP, yet so like her as well! I can tell a logical transformation during the time you've placed MP in J's loving care. Keep it up, and again, thank you!! More, please!!
Author's Response: More will be coming soon, although i feel we need a lighter chapter after all this heaviness, so i will endevour to lighten things up a little hopefully. And there may yet be hope it all turns out well.
thanks so much for your encrouagment too, keesp the candle burning in the dark hours.
Date: 24/01/07 06:22 pm
God, it's so simple, yet evocative. "Hey, hey", but of course. It speaks of childish innocence, golden age of comedy and the ease of which Jarod greats those - and becomes part of their lives - that he saves.
I'm moved. Thank you.
Author's Response: I am so very pleased you like it and i will endevour to keep the emotional intensity in the forthcoming chapters. Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed
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