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Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 04:33 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Is that a quote from Jarod? do we have to wait until next chapter to see if it does work.  And who is it working for/on?

 

more questions than the chapter is long!

 

okay, I'll give it a 10 for a cliff hanger. 

Reviewer: Bucky Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/05/08 12:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

WOW! Thanks CrackerjacknPez! I'm glad you enjoyed my story 'It Isn't Easy' and thank you for the review! (blushing) BTW when do we get another story from you?

So The Mystery Girl is on vacation and has taken Jarod with her. I'm sure Miss Parker will have something to say about that!

 

Author's Response:

Oh, very much so I would think. But as we all know this story has a tendency of taking unexpected turns. And unfortunatly I am not privy to the contents of the next chapter (Jacci keeps it all very secret you see). Guess we'll just have to wait and see...

Reviewer: Patricia_D Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/07 11:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

quote:
Crackerjacknpez, while neither of us can reach the height or caliber of Jac's writing, you truly write well and express your self eloquently. I could feel your pain re: Miss Parker and Jarod in your last reveiw as clearly as if it were my own. Truly you are gifted. And because of that, I was spurred on til late at night, writing the story I had started. And now it is complete, a tribute to your's and Jac's inspiration.


Author's Response: I could not agree more. you can see the talent in all of the reveiws here, it is just oozing out all over the place.

Your story is a moving tribute, and i am forever grateful for it.

AWWW, THANKyou, Patricia-D, Jacs!!!! I am absolutely floored by the back-to-back compliments. that means a lot, ESPECIALLY coming from you two!

for that, patricia-d, I'm going to look fwd to reading your fics! *heads there now*

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/08/07 09:02 am
Title: Chapter 1

test again

Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/07 05:47 am
Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/07 05:43 am
Title: Chapter 1

If Jarod's with you that would explain why he didn't answer when RaChell wanted to send him to me last week. (RaChell, the guy can't be Argyle, I just dropped him off at the airport ;-))

For very selfish reasons I'm hoping that Jarod can't solve all your problems or this story would be finished. I'm hoping for an update soon. 



Author's Response: Cathy, the one thing you can rest easy on is the fact that there will ALWAYS be new problems.

Everytime I get it working just right, somethign comes along and wrecks something or other. Even Jarod AND Broots couldn't keep this all running smoothly all the time.

Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/06/07 12:10 am
Title: Chapter 1

MP.jpgI have a question (oh yes I do!  Even if you don't want to hear it missy!)   I get a e-mail saying I have a response to a review I left  for example:

jacci has responded to your review. You can see the response at http://www.pretendercentre.com/missingpieces/user.php?action=reviewsby

Well that is nice but when I click on it I get:

a message saying I am not authorized to be allowed in OR 

If I am logged in, I get sent to the first page of reviews I've left.  Well I have left little over 300 reviews.  So unless I go thru and look at every review I've ever left or go to your stories, how am I suppose to know which story I left a review for that you responded to????  (scratches head, oh wait!  That was someone poking my head with a sharp pointy stick!  Must have been Cathy.)



Author's Response:

Hey Rachell, lucky for you i am in a question-answering mood.

That respond thing is a pain i know, but right now there isn't all that much I can do about it.
If you aren't logged in when you use the link, you get the Unatuorised message, and if you are 
logged in, then you get the page of reveiws, instead of the one you got a response to.

There have been requests to have this changed and hopefully the script gets an update soon.
Until then, I am afraid we are stuck with it. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/06/07 12:28 pm
Title: Chapter 1

PCD?????? 

Author's Response:

Hee hee hee. Knew that would spark your interest!!

Picture Complusive Disorder

although i notice that last reveiw was picture-less. See therapy is working already! 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/07 08:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

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'emial woes'   Hmm, maybe you can install a spell check on the reviews.  Either that or I should make a appointemnt with my eye doctor.  (snicker, sincker.  Just love using the photo thingy)

Oh and don't forget to answer my e-mail w/question re: Sleepyhead. 



Author's Response:

Ohh i got so excited re the emAIl working that i forgot all about it. Yeah, as long as not toooo much over, that should be good. Perhaps i can break one toe for each 100 you are over? Sounds reasonable?

As for spellcheck, have already requested a mod for that, and unfortunately it is never going to happen. 
Bugger, will have to learn to splel on my own. *sighs*

I think you have PCD!!! 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/07 07:39 pm
Title: Chapter 1

MP.jpgCan I please let you know if I get noticifcation of your response to my reviews of your timeless and never ending story?  Hmmm, well let's see....  (wink, wink.  Oh wait!  That was someone poking me in the eye with a sharp pointy stick.  Ouch!)

 



Author's Response:

Ohh yay!!! It is workign!!!! oh fabbo!!

You rock RaChell !!

Looks like i can tentatively say emial woes are sorted. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/06/07 07:20 pm
Title: Chapter 1

k just checking new smtp settings see if this works

Author's Response: so far looking pretty good

Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/07 09:23 am
Title: Chapter 1

Cathy wrote:

RaChell, there's nothing wrong with Broots, I like him too. But I like Sydney even more - though I don't quite see how he could help here ;-)  Besides, don't you think it's getting boring/lonely for Broots if he doesn't get some company in this story soon?

Hmmm, well maybe Sydney's help is required after all.  It seems that the author has stopped responding to our reviews and perhaps Sydney can figure out the physiological reasons for that.  Of course we could also call upon Dr. Wm. Raines to examine and evaluate her.

 

As for Broots, I doubt he's loney and bored.  He's never had so much attention or the Centre stage to himself since .... ah... well heck! I don't think he even had a full  episode devoted to him! 



Author's Response:

The author in question has been uber busy and fully intends to respond to every single one of these wonderful reviews. I hear that she is spending much of her time with Broots, learning shiny new scripts so that Missing Pieces can have shiny new things like rotating art work and rotating quotes, and perhaps even more to come.

Also, an update for efiction script is imminent and that SHOULD fix the current email notification 
problem we are having. So with that pending, decided to wait until that is working and will 
thus send out notifications to registered authors that they have been responded to. 

Perhaps some sinister reason for silence woudl be more interesting???? 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/05/07 07:08 pm
Title: Chapter 1

RaChell, there's nothing wrong with Broots, I like him too. But I like Sydney even more - though I don't quite see how he could help here ;-)  Besides, don't you think it's getting boring/lonely for Broots if he doesn't get some company in this story soon?



Author's Response:

Hey Cathy, thanks for siding with Broots :d And i made the next one sort of Sydney .

 

ps, can you pls let me know if you get an email regarding this repsonse, i am trying to fix the emails.

And i cant really do that without any feedback  (mwhaahhaaa)

thanks 

Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/05/07 11:19 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Now wait a minute Cathy and Parker!  Just what is wrong with Broots? (putting hands on hips and glaring)

As you know from my fan fic (Mrs Broots, Love is Blind)I have a special place in my heart for the tech.  Sure he's a little thin on top and isn't as cute as Lyle or Jarod but you have to admit he's one of the most compassionate and caring Centre employee around. 

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Author's Response:

LMAO, love the shameless pimping of your own fic!!!!

Never should have taught you about pics or links, what a beastie i have created.

 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/05/07 06:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This is turning into a Broots only story. When are we going to see someone else again?

I agree with Thunderchild. I have enough scary images burned on my eyelids already, I do not need you to add to this by calling Broots... no, not gonna say it... ;-)

Update soon? 



Author's Response:

Yep, i feel lots of updates coming. Now i think i have the email issue fixed, will be responding to all my reviews and probably be running a 3.3 update soon so lots of updates on the saga as more problems arise.

think i might call the genius in this time to help me instead of the tech nerd. 
After all, i wouldnt mind Jarod being my puff daddy anytime :D 

Reviewer: Cathy Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/05/07 04:40 am
Title: Chapter 1

Broots is really starting to run the whole show here, isn't he? I've always known he was highly underrated in the show. 

Will the next chapter be more action-packed again? 



Author's Response: We all secretly love Broots you know!!! Even Miss Parker does.

Reviewer: Cathy Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/04/07 01:44 am
Title: Chapter 1

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 Nice pattern there bold italic underline

That should just about cover everything.... 

 

 

Author's Response: I believe you missed strikethru  lmao

Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/07 10:29 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Is review email working?

Author's Response: It is now!!!

Reviewer: jaccione Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/03/07 03:58 am
Title: Chapter 1

"Broots is with you always. He's like Jesus, in a way. And also like the Flying Spagetti monster. <3 Broots. Go, Broots. Did you know that Broots and Miss Parker, and also Sydney, were so doing it? OT3, I'm telling you. I'm so glad that finally someone else realises it. Keeeep gooooing. "

Oh Blade, you are soooo naughty!   :)



Author's Response: LMAO You two are evil!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/07 09:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

jacci is the BEST !!!

:o)

cheers!

Author's Response: OHh thanks, hee hee

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/07 09:23 am
Title: Chapter 1

That's an exciting story! :0)

Author's Response:

Yay, i work endlessy to pump out intricate and long chapters to keep the excitement up, labouring over every paragraph.

 

Reviewer: Starbits7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/03/07 01:42 pm
Title: Chapter 1

And to think i thought this fic was completed, you just suprise with another epic chapter.

 

All i can say is WOW.

 

Hope there is more to come. 



Author's Response: This chappie was rushed, as you can probably tell. I feel it lacks some depth, but the hounds of hell were on my heels (aka the hackers) and so this was a speedy update.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/07 08:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wowie-wowie-wow!!!! Such an insightful chapter! I can REALLY tell that you've captured the essence of who Jarod is! He DOES need a break... from being chased, from having so many questions staying unanswered... And he needs to catch a break, too, after everything he's been through! I can tell that if there's one thing he doesn't need a break from, it's MP, and you've captured that so beautifully! In fact, you've made it transparently clear in the poeticism of your words that it's b/c of MP that J's lasted this long. Thank you so much for this chapter! Keep it up, please!!

Author's Response: OH no!!!! you have out-ed me as a shipper before the entire world!!!

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/07 06:40 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Laura, you're not crazy. In fact you're very brave and the only one to ask just what the hell is going on. You deserve a lot of credit for speaking up.

The story is excalty like you see it. Each chapter Jacs posted consist of one sentence. It started out as a test story to see how her changes to the website were working. She had intended to delete it but it seem to take on a life of it's own with the reviews.

If you notice most of the reviews are very creative writing and tie the simple one sentence chapter in with the Pretender. It's a exercise in using your skill and talents as a writer. Only this time you're doing it as a review.

Feel free to join in, no one should feel left out. You just have to be creative and have fun. :)

Author's Response: So beautifully put Rachell, as always.
Since it was you that got this thing running, i would like to invite you to co-author the next chapter with me, if you would like.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/07 06:06 pm
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