Reviews For Dangerous News
Title: Chapter 3
Date: 23/11/06 09:52 pm
Well, the story is interesting and I commend you on even attempting to write in a foreign language. I've studied several languages, but would never try to write a story in any other than english. Having said that, this story would be easier to follow if you had it read by a beta. A few things are a bit confusing. Overall, though good story. Please continue
Author's Response: Yeah, I know ... can you tell me where to get a beta? That would be nice ...
Date: 23/11/06 09:52 pm