Reviews For One Man's Dream
Title: Chapter 2

Okay, think I got lost there for a minute.. still, good story. I'm in no way being critical (Not like I'm on the NY's best seller's, I'm not even a writer) but as an avid reader, I will say that a paragraph or two was quite large. (made it difficult for me to read)

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 06:11 am
Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to the next part..

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 05:58 am


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