Absolutely great Gemini-M! It's so edge of your seat captivating and I can't wait for more. Do whatever it takes, but get your next chapter out ASAP!
I'd give you a rating of more stars then 10 stars but since that's the highest Missing Pieces goes, you'll have to settle for that. Editted to add: This story is one of those that stays with you long after you have finished reading it. Love those kind of stories! :)

Author's Response:

Hi RaChell,

Sorry if you receive this reply twice, I pressed the wrong key accidently.

Thank you for your very kinds words and review.  Reviews are very inspiring to a writer.  At the moment I'm working hard on the final chapter, but this one might take me a little while.  The last meeting between J and MP will take some work to reach the right ending to this little tale.  Well, I hope that you like the conclusion to my story.  Thanks again.

Mercy