I liked this development with the Inner Sense, and with the brothers being involved like this... Don't leave us hanging here, please continue the story!

Your stories came highly recommended, and justifiably so. Very well written by someone who knows the characters. My biggest complaint about some of the fanfic is that they don't capture the true nature of the characters throughout the show, but focus in on one minute of one episode that showed one small element. You have not done that. None of us are measured by one instant of our life. It may come back to haunt us but it is not necessarily who we are. To make a long review short: Your portrayal of Miss Parker is not the gun, the smoking nostril, the bitch. She was more than all that, she was intelligent, strong, determined with hidden compassion and loyalty. I hope to read more from you in the near future. It made my morning.

It is good to see you writing again. I know I have missed it. This story has a wonderful beginning-- the next chapter can't come soon enough! Zipp

Who’s after Parker and why? What’s Lyle up to? It’s a great beginning and I’m curious to see where you’re taking this. So please update soon. Cathy

Great start please continue soon.

love this..next chapter pls...