Hi just read your story it was very good.
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Date: 19/07/18 11:39 pm
A long story with a nice addition to a previous storyline involving the character Davey. Entertaining and good dialogue as well. Too bad Raines didn't get shot in this one. I'm surprised the triumvirate didn't get wind of this and execute the three (Mr. Parker, Raines and Lyle). Oh well, another storyline for later maybe.
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Date: 14/04/10 01:29 am
I don't know how I missed this one-yet another masterpiece that as always with your writing, is such a joy to read! Your talent for centre scheming is brilliant too-perhaps a little unnerving even :) though you do make up for it with the ending-won't be forgetting that scene any time soon!
Thanks for another great read and the smile you gave me at the end!
Reviewer: _jk_ Signed [Report This]Date: 22/12/08 04:27 am
That was verry good, liked it very much and glad Cox got exactly what he deserved, that bastard!!! Loved the depth of the Centre scheming too.
Now to decide which fic next????
Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]Date: 06/07/08 02:18 pm
This is awesome so far, what a great idea. I am looking very much forward to see how this one pans out.
Reviewer: jacs Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/07 02:43 am
You're welcome!! Thanks to you!! So it's an happy end!^^ Now I'm waiting for your three other stories!!
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Date: 11/08/06 04:44 am
Don't be too cruel!!
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Date: 08/08/06 09:23 am
It was worth the wait!! I'm eager to learn about miss parker's plan!
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Date: 02/08/06 11:07 am
So much action !!! I really do hope that Miss Parker and Jarod are both going to be alive in the end. Please you have to continue this !!!
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Date: 18/07/06 10:17 am
ahh great story, well written :) need more lol ;o)
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Date: 15/07/06 03:21 pm
it's still so good!! I can only congratulate you!! I love your way of writing and your imagination!!! Thank you for writing!!
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Date: 15/07/06 09:09 am
Thanks!! It's so sweet!^^ It's still so well-written and it's really thrilling. I'm eager to read the next part, to know what will happen to parker, jarod, davey and cain!!
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Date: 12/07/06 03:01 am
wow,wow and one more time wow.
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Date: 24/06/06 08:01 am
yes, it was worth the wait!! Well, I want to know all about the secrets!! It's so mysterious, I can't guess what will happen next!!
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Date: 24/06/06 05:18 am
Stop asking if we like, lol, hell!! how couldn't we? So a lot of questions!! And how can you write 3 stories at the same time?? Great work!!
Author's Response: I need the positive reinforcement and constant reminder that I can write. ;-) Thanks anyway for your support. Appreciate it.
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Date: 10/06/06 01:50 pm
More and more interesting!! I can't guess what would happen next!! You know how to keep readers in suspense!!
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Date: 06/05/06 02:29 pm
"Reviews make me write faster…" lol I'm eager to read the next chapter!! What does Cox want??!
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Date: 06/05/06 09:47 am
Jarod is in a fine mess!! You're a great writer!!
Author's Response: Thanks, hope you like the rest. ;-)
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Date: 05/05/06 01:16 pm
Your story is so... The fear and danger, great.
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Date: 04/03/06 08:01 am
Hm verry interesting start, you got me hooked! please continue :)
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Date: 03/03/06 06:13 pm