I have to say that I was a bit hesitant when I start the first chapter but it turns out to be a nice surprise . Cause I really like it ! Now I wonder why it's incomplete , was it because you wanted a sequel ? Anyway Iwant to thank you for sharing . Who knows maybe we would see more stories from you one of those days .
Reviewer: tana Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/06/16 08:03 am
Hi WOW that was a great story.
Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/10/14 06:44 am
Wow, disturbing but brilliant!
Loved it!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed [Report This]Date: 16/10/11 09:15 am
Very good Danni! A very enjoyble sotry and with such a unique twist. I love the way you wove all the Centre characters in to this tale. It was very twisted and so Centre-like, are you sure you haven't taken lessons from them at NuGensis? ;) Very good, job well done!
Reviewer: RaChell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/03/07 05:51 pm
Wow! really good! I can't wait to finish it. :)
[Report This]Date: 27/03/07 10:30 pm
Interesting story. Would love to read more of it. Please post more soon.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/06/06 03:54 pm
good fanfiction well done :) i love the MP/J scenes good writting update soon :)
Reviewer: aly33 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/06/06 02:07 am
You have to write more, we want to know what happens next! :D
Reviewer: Mira Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/06 02:00 pm
I loved reading this story and I have to say this is a great angle to start a story with. Honestly I would never come up with this angle myself but it is one worth exploring. I'd like to see where this is going to end.
Reviewer: andy.hermans2@pandora.be Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/04/06 02:02 pm
Glad your back great chapter please continue soon.
Reviewer: julie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/03/06 12:41 pm
I like it; glad you've found time to post.
Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/03/06 02:09 am
another great chapter,please continue soon
Reviewer: julie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/01/06 12:49 pm
Happy to see another update so soon! Do quite get why Parker would go home considering she and Jarod know about the exchange Alex is expecting. And can't see why Jarod would let her go without keeping an eye on her considering how upset he was after his dream. However, the questions don't keep me from enjoying the story and hoping it continues--soon!
Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/01/06 12:56 am
I hope there will be a scene with a jealous Alex on a rampage and a territorial Jarod....mmm that will be nice...great chapter
Reviewer: goldentail Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/06 12:26 pm
This chapter was even better....hmm wut would alex have to say about this?
Reviewer: Mishelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/06 02:37 am
GREAT STORY CANT WAIT TO READ MORE PLEASE POST SOON
Reviewer: JULIE Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/01/06 10:43 pm
Oh man...so good! I can't decide whos hotter, alex or jarod
Reviewer: Mishelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/01/06 01:29 am
Good story. Hope you update soon!!
Reviewer: badgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/06 07:35 pm
yea, another chapter! So, Alex is quite deranged; too much time with Lyle, I presume. Here are my theories: (1) Alex and Beatrice are Suzanne's "dead" children. (2) The twins are Suzanne's and their missing father is Mr. Lyle. Please do update again soon!
Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/06 03:15 am
i'm loving your story...
Reviewer: goldentail Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/01/06 01:31 am
Intersesting. Please don't wait too long to post again. As long as Parker doesn't have a relationship with a 17 year-old, I'm in.
Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/01/06 03:34 am
