Hey ! you finally kicked some of the bad-guys asses. Good Job !!! The current question is : what are Jarod and Miss Parker going to do now ??? The answer in the next chapter... Keep posting, this story is just too good. "big grin"
Author's Response: About time, ;-) hope you like the next one.
Date: 03/02/06 11:40 pm
Wow. A well done action scene with so much character interaction that I have to say I was very impressed by it all. Good chapter with that wonderful scene between j and mp.
I'll be watching for the next chapters. Thank you for sharing your vision.
Author's Response: Hope you will enjoy the next one. Thanks for the review
Date: 03/02/06 08:46 pm
This is so good! I look every day for your sequel! Why did Alex do all those things to Parker? My God, what will happen to her and to Jarod!! I feared the worse for Margaret and Emily, fortunately there was his husband !! Should I thank Lyle for taking Jarod outside the Centre? He saved Emily and his mother!! I'm waiting for the sequel, as always! It's again a great work you have done here!! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, hope you like the next one.
Date: 03/02/06 06:58 pm
Excellent!!! It's so good! I can't wait for the sequel!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review...hope you'll like the next chap
Date: 26/01/06 12:04 pm
It's still so good!! Could you write more about Ms Parker's feelings?
Author's Response: next chap will be more MP. I hope :-) Thanks for review
Date: 21/01/06 10:21 pm
Write,write,write.I wait.This is great story.How did Major find his wife?
Author's Response: Sorry, next chap will have the info you need. thanks
Date: 19/01/06 06:30 pm
Your story is great,great,great.I am so curious at the end.Don´t let us wait too long.
Author's Response: Will try not to.
Date: 14/01/06 08:54 pm
I used the button ;o) Your story is so good, I'm waiting for the sequel! Poor Jarod! and J.!! How can they escape?! PS: Yes, of course, I will read your story!!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. Hope you will continue to enjoy it.
Date: 13/01/06 03:04 pm
Thank you!! My God! This is so good! I had thought of Alex!! I can't wait for the sequel! lol
Just one question: why doesn't Parker have her inner sense warning her??
Author's Response: Thanks, Miss Parker's inner sense is not really valid for my story. It was only used once in the first movie, and she had to have Sydney help her. Hope you will still read.
Date: 06/01/06 09:16 pm
This is so good!! Please publish the sequel!! I can't wait!! I want to know who is torturing Ms Parker!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy the next chapter. :-)
Date: 06/01/06 05:23 pm
This is so good!! Please publish the sequel!! I can't wait!! I want to know who is torturing Ms Parker!!Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/01/06 05:22 pm
It's really getting creepier and creepier. I hate it when the bad guys have the uper hand. I'm waiting for other chapters, of course. LOL !!!
Author's Response: It will get better, I promise. Thanks for the reviews.
Date: 26/12/05 09:29 pm
I've been following your story since you started posting it and I just want to say I'm really liking it. Can't wait to read more.Reviewer: Alexandra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/12/05 11:26 pm
I am so totally hooked on this story. Have you already finished this tale or are you still writing it? How many chapters do you think it will be? Can't wait for the next one. Please keep updating regularly.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks
Date: 15/12/05 11:57 pm
While I realize there is more to come, I don't belive the Jarod wouldn't find some way to warn Sydney. As much as he wouldn't want to be responsible for Sydney's peril, Jarod would want just as much to see Lyle fail. Overall, I am enjoying the story though.Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/12/05 08:13 pm
Thank you for updating this story. Please update soon.Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/11/05 01:40 am
This beginning is so good !!! You have to continue this fanfic, I'm really curious to know what happened to Jarod and who kidnapped Parker. Has the monster any connection with Lyle ?!? Well, you are the only one who can tell me, so please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed the beginning.
Date: 23/11/05 08:28 pm