grrrr!!!! what a cliffhanger!! good thing you've got more posted.. I liked the 'dream' thing j had, w/ the knight stuff.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed [Report This]Date: 09/07/07 12:06 pm
This is so good, I can't believe I waited so long to read it, bad me
Reviewer: jacs Signed [Report This]Date: 12/06/07 02:32 am
I can't possibly wait to find out what happens next....with all the characters had gone through I think they deserve a very happy ending....
Reviewer: goldentail Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 12/02/06 02:20 pm
Oh my God!! It's so insane!! It's getting darker and darker! This chapter is full of actions, I didn't have the time to relax one second, lol! I still have tachycardia, as if I was in the story! Your description are so well-done and they make the story so real. Bravo! It's look like the bads win for the moment and I can't imagine how the goods will get through all these evil's plans!! Nevertheless, I would have appreciate a little more writing on Miss Parker's feelings about her rescue. I'm eager to discover why Lyle had plotted with Alex, what were his intentions? This chapter is excellent. I'm waiting for the next chapter. And I can say that I'm burnig with impatience!!
Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/06 09:03 am
And I was thinking it was going to get better... Are you on the psycho's side or what ?!? LOL ! But don't worry, I'm already waiting for your next chapter.
Reviewer: Miss Nathou Love Signed [Report This]Date: 12/02/06 12:29 am
