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Title: Perceptions

Loved it completelely!

Author's Response: Glad to hear that!

Reviewer: Danni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/06 05:38 am
Title: Perceptions

Wow is the only word I can say! You describe so well the "needs" of Lyle that you can make us feel it. Also, the way you write sentences make them even more real. Like Jerseygirl says, this line's so powerful :"In that moment he knew what he’d seen in her eyes only seconds ago: acceptance". Only with this sentence, we can see how Lyle is thinking. Do other fanfic like that please. You're a fabulous writer.

Author's Response: *bows deeply* thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it... more stories come when my muse decides to be cooperative *glares at muse*

Reviewer: Momo20 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/11/05 05:51 am
Title: Perceptions

caught the bunny!!!!! It fits well that deep inside him lyle is actually thankful to Jarod for keeping them on track. So he can enjoy at all time his abnormal want for her. Imagining him smelling the scent... I couldnt help but think of another psychopath; remember Hanibal Lector? *gg* Great description of that scene and sentiment! *In that moment he knew what he'd seen in her eyes only seconds ago: acceptance* - what a line! Made me shiver! Question: didn't quite get that line (me slow sometimes lol) *He could see the desire to slide away in her eyes, * -- what desire? Wasn't she bored of her opposite companion? Amazing, shocking but amazingly good!

Author's Response: Heh. Yeah, caught the plot bunny. To answer your question: she wants to slide/get away from him; as we already found out, you overlooked the 'to' in the sentence. :) Glad you like this story so much and that you think the scenes come across. And about that line... *bows* thank you! glad I made you shiver... kinda ;)

Reviewer: jerseygirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/05 06:19 pm
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