Nice, very nice! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you dear. :D
[Report This]Date: 24/05/07 09:54 pm
Love the chapter!!!! You did a very good job with the love making scene! Just enough 'smut' to fit the storry!
Really liked the part:
"I just," he paused, staring up at her with his deep brown eyes, trepidation smeared into every line on his face, "I haven't done this a lot."
Parker grinned, "Oh I see. You pull the 'I've lived in a secret organization's basement for thirty years and they never taught me how to properly screw a woman' card with all the ladies?"
He glared back at her grin and she laughed, leaning into his ear and whispering, "Relax, wonderboy. We'll find out exactly what kind of wonders you've been bestowed with, whether I have to hold your hand the whole way or not."
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Greetz
Author's Response: Oh thank you I was hoping you all would think it fit with the general taste of the story. Haha I liked that part especially too. :) Reviewer: Morgan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/05/07 02:52 pm
So, what is Jarod dreaming about regarding Lyle. Let us know.
Author's Response: Oh no oh now, we'll just have to see!
Date: 22/05/07 01:04 am
great as usual!
i really liked it when Miss P. slammed the fridge and barked out that she had slept with Jarod :o) it was so funny :o)
so, how was it? writing a smut?.... though, this wasn't a real smut but it was soooo great. even better :o) more tempting.
hope more to come soon.
cheers!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Yeah not too smutty at all. But it was a dream to write, since it would be a dream for it to ever happen. Siiiiiiiiigh. Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/05/07 12:44 am
My biggest grievance about smut is that as soon as it hits the scene, the plot goes to bits (more like Plot.. what plot..), but you didn't let that happen, in fact you brought it up a notch!! A great chappie, and can't wait to read more :P
Author's Response: Exactly and I could never ever ever let that happen! Thanks very much :D Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/05/07 10:24 pm
dun dun dun...where the hell did molly goooo? and oh dear is lyle not dead?? and yesssss JMP getting some action, gotta LOVE them :) wonderful wonderful chappie, update soon than last time, k thanks.
Author's Response: Oh no maybe she got lost on the way back from getting some ice? ;) Haha you are not paying very well attention, missy, Lyle has clearly been alive for many chapters now. <3 JMP. Thanks for the review, you make me happy! :D
Date: 21/05/07 08:36 pm
