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Title: Choices Made

Goooood,that was beautiful!!!
Adored this story! The fact that Lyle wnats to kill off Parker seems veeery plausibel to me and that Raines doesn't mind is just plain logical. But the twist with an alive and kicking Daddy-dearest who also wants his Angel's death makes it all the better. Although I would've loved to see more action,scheming and angsty drama in this story until those 2 found their happy ending(which isn't a 100%-ending if u think about it...sequel in the making maybe? ;-)) I did enjoy it a lot!
I do think the whole story with Mr Parker showing up and all 3 bad guys wanting MissP's death while J and MP team up together to find their freedom and happiness holds a huge potential!
Loved your dream sequences in the first chapters and had a hard laugh at the J-MP-incident where she was throwing a 9iron at him >He wasn't that bad last night, was he?

Reviewer: IceAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/10 10:54 pm
Title: Choices Made

I'm glad for the happy ending.  =)  It made a very good bedtime story!

Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/03/10 07:14 am
Title: Choices Made

I am so delighted that you finally gave us the final piece of this timeless story. I've been looking forward to reading the ending for quite some time and now I can with certaintly that I've enjoyed your story from start to wonderful finish. I hope to read more from you.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/03/10 09:15 pm
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