I know that u've written this story quite some time ago ;-) but I just came across it and: wow! so beautifully written. Made me very sad at times and made me wonder how their (MP&J) life/relationship might develope further. Loved it that you wrote little bits about stuff we never got to see in the show (e.g. Miss Parker's trouble with coming home to a place where her beloved was murdered). Always wondered about that myself. Such a traumatizing exoerience to find your loved one shot in the head on your porch...and then having to pass that same spot eeevery day. Must've been hell for her. And so far I've never seen anyone engaging to such detail in that topic so far.
could totally see Parker in this short story of yours and enjoyed it a lot! Am going to read your other stories now. ;-)
Any chance you will ever finish"The evolution of things"??
Keep up the good work!!
Date: 02/04/10 08:50 pm