Very exciting story ~ please finish it :)
Reviewer: JeanneB Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/06/08 12:09 am
I caught the first two parts on the pretenderfic mailing list yesterday and was thrilled to see part 3 here today. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: Visiongirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/05/05 02:07 pm
Ooh. Getting interesting. Great work, keep the chapters coming :)
Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed [Report This]Date: 21/05/05 12:52 am
Nice fiction. I loved reading every part of it. I can't wait for you to post the next part. Hopefully, the next chapter will be posted very soon. :-)
Reviewer: Rev2004 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/05/05 06:57 am
I really loved this piece! I look forward to reading more! The characters seem really true to themselves!
Reviewer: Julie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/05/05 06:08 am
Very nice. I was amused at poor Broots having Jarod land on him. Poor guy really doesn't want anything to do with the capture, he just wants his gadgets. I liked Jarod's 'yeah, right' at the 'Stop Jarod!' comments because that always amused me in the series. Yeah like he's going to stop just because you say. I look forward to seeing some more, and welcome back :)
Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed [Report This]Date: 20/05/05 03:33 am