Please go back and finish the story it is so good and you done a wonderful job. But please you can't stop there not with miss parker in trouble pretty please finish the story.
Reviewer: megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/06/11 06:59 am
More updates! I'd like to see what happens next with this cliff hanger.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/01/10 07:12 am
I remember reading and enjoying this a while back. When I found it here I had hoped you finished it! It's deserving of an ending! please.
Reviewer: Zipp Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/10/05 12:57 am
This is a good start to an amazing story and I can not wait to read the finished product.
Reviewer: Emilia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/07/05 10:23 pm
Oh please tell me you're going to finish this story soon! You've got me hooked from the beginning and I can't wait to see were you're going with this. I especially like your Lyle, the way he keeps trying to achieve his aim despite everything that gets in the way.
Reviewer: Cathy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/05/05 07:25 pm