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Title: Part 17: The Psy Who Came In From The Cold

Oh, it's incomplete, but otherwise, it's a fantastic read. You're not going to leave us all hanging? Are you?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  It is my intention to finish!  Life has intervened and effectively derailed my attempts until now.  It is encouraging to know that you are enjoying the tale.  I am currently deciding what to do with Alicin's tormentors.  Donald Gleason may step into an empty elevator shaft soon, but death is too good for Jerry Wurth...bwahahah.  Wurth, btw, irepresents real person who worked for well known research and development corporation and drew out a lawsuit for a man who worked in a room full of toxic and radioactive cannisters (not harmful, they insisted) until the man finally died of cancers related to the substances he was working with.  The man and his wife were dear friends of my sister in law and I was moved by their story.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 05:12 am
Title: Part 17: The Psy Who Came In From The Cold

Great story so far! I like your additions of summary comments. It gives a nice reminder to the reader of what's in store for the reading. A unique story of another character with Angelo involved. Really intriguing storyline for Alicin and the pretenders. Please continue since this is one of the few that are worth reading many times.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/10 11:42 pm
Title: Part 17: The Psy Who Came In From The Cold

quite intriguing alot of characterisation and strong presence i am an avid reader great work well bye for now

Reviewer: Jarodkyle Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/09/09 11:44 pm
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