Title: At The Centre Of The Game

I'm not sure I get it exactly except maybe the Centre is some kind of place where people pay to get their fantasies fullfilled. The characters were written ok and I guess people do have rape-revenge fantasies. Some people are really into bdsm. My namesake did have that whip in that one episode and Jarod had his sex toys. Good job overall.

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/07/15 12:23 am
Title: At The Centre Of The Game

Hi just read your story it was good.

Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/14 10:36 pm
Title: At The Centre Of The Game

That was a very unique and strange story. I was like Onisius too, quite confused for a bit, and then when it unfolded it all became clear, in a twisted kind of way. LMAO, that was well done, and very original

Author's Response: You guys are too kind!  It's always nice to get good reviews from writers like you and Onisius.  Thank you!

Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/09/08 09:18 am
Title: At The Centre Of The Game

lmao, i was confused for a while after the **** wondering what was going on, but once you spelt it out for me, i laughed out loud. That is so very funny lol, i love it. who would have guess people could pay to be a beaten up 'pretender' and a frustrated and angry parker? lmao. i love how you changed the whole concept here, it was great.

Author's Response: Thanks!  It was a hoot to write and a delight to post.

Reviewer: Onisius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/09/08 09:01 am
Title: At The Centre Of The Game

LOL

Interesting idea ... I just love to remember her with the whip ... and he with all his "toys" ... ;-)

You should have mentioned Broots ... After all, he's Puff Daddy ... 



Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments! :) Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Thara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/07 12:25 pm


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