I'm so relieved that you updated this and that Broots is closing in on Jarod and can rescue from Jarod Parker...soon. How is she going to react? I'm so excited to know more.
Please hurry.
Please hurry 🙏🏼 🙏🏼 🙏🏼 🙏🏼
More?
Reviewer: Sela Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/08/25 01:31 am
Top notch, young lady! 🤩
Bravo!!!
Roses!
[Report This]Date: 30/08/25 01:09 am
Oomph. This, like everything you write, is amazing.
Reading you is always like watching the series. You bring the characters to life.
Congratulations 🎉.
Thank you for sticking with us
Reviewer: Kat Signed [Report This]Date: 30/08/25 12:19 am
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😯
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I'm so totally stoked for more.
Now please!?!
Please!
[Report This]Date: 29/08/25 10:53 pm
Aggghhhhh Broots. The poor fellow right? I can feel his agony. I can't wait for the gang to be all back together again. Parker is going to need all of the support she can get.
More please? Soon please!
Reviewer: Gem Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/25 06:02 am
Hey, I love Sam, too. You really seem to love ALL of the characters, except sometimes maybe not Jarod so much.. not always, not when he torments Parker.
Sydney tells on himself a lot here. "You didn't Sam." And then says Broots has bias. Spot on.
I can feel the frustration they are both living with. I know how infuriating it is for them both. Sydney telling Broots alcohol isn't answer and then Broots saying it is the answer. Broots wishing that Sam had killed Jarod.. it's anger and frustration. Broots always was the normal fan's eyes, he was the normie of the gang, the average person surrounded by craazy and danger, and totally human and wishing Sam had killed Jarod is also really human, it's a normal human response to want horrible people gone, I think. Jarod is horrible, and it doesn't matter that what happened to him was also horrific.
You're really go ALL-IN with this. You seem fearless about it too. I think I would be scared to show all of the humanity, the hope, the friendship but also the ugliness and the pain.
Your summary of Forces of Nature is "Nothing is more hideous than human nature" and you're right.
You're right.
This is brilliant already. I'm eager to read more.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/25 03:29 am
I'm scared but I'm still reading. I love every word that I'm reading. I love how in character they are. It's magical. I feel excitement for more and hope you are writing as quickly as possible.
Reviewer: Thara Nicole Signed [Report This]Date: 29/08/25 02:37 am
Bravo bravo, young lady. You're a hell of an author and I'm glad you chose this fandom to write!❣❣❣’🌸🌹🌺🌼’🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌼🌼🌼🌼🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 10:53 pm
Ohh this. So much this!
I can't get enough!!!
Reviewer: Jami Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 06:15 pm
Whoa whoa 🫰🏼 😮 ’ 😘 The characters and their dialogue are the total chef's kiss ’ muuah to the already bang on perfect story.
Jarod's going down finally I think. Broots is promising to make Jarod feel remorse and he's already honoring the promise-threat to go after Jarod if he hurt Parker, and yah he definitely hurt her.
Broots has big time heart and that makes him the enemy of anyone who hurts his friends and children. Broots is underestimated at times but that's what catches people by surprise. I don't know how I can wait for the next chapter. It's cruel to make me wait!
More please for the love of God!!! 🙏🏼
Please?
Reviewer: Jen Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/08/25 04:31 pm
Broots is still such a sweetie and Sydney is still such a shrink. Brilliantly executed!
Congratulations 🎉 ‘🏼 ‘🏼 ‘🏼 ‘🏼 🎉 🎉 ‘🏼
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 03:01 pm
Please update again soon. I'm dying for more. I need it now now now.
Reviewer: Lizzy Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 06:18 am
Oh, man, I love this. A second signal. They are so in character. I'm watching it instead of reading it I want you to know. You illustrate with words and it's so amazing. I love how Broots sees Sydney's face and stops explaining and just gets to the point. I think of Parker's "skip the tram ride, Broots" lol.
I feel the frustration, the headiness of being so close and still too far, and Broots' real worry for Parker. I feel his deep hatred for Jarod too.
Sydney is such a shrink, as always. Broots isn't wrong about junkies and as someone with personal experience I know that he has every right to distrust a junkie. I'd almost forgotten Broots ever even had a wife. I love the way Broots stood his ground and gave back. Sydney still has that fathers day card, and preaching at Broots about a bias. Lordt. Who is he fooling? Psychiatrist needs to heal himself already.
I love it. You're a hell of a story teller and author. I'm so eager to read more and will wait. IMPATIENTLY.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 05:33 am
I wish there were more chapters. It's addicting.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 05:00 am
Jarod has had the time and if anyone could do it... and would anyone here be surprised. The guy had to hallucinate his mum to stop himself from killing a man and he did violate that one man's autonomy by taking out his kidney and it was a skeezy motel. The parallels to rape in a skeezy motel are drawing themselves and I didn't always realize that... it was only after reading you that I went, oh, shit, true dat.
I think Sydney is right that Jarod doesn't want to hurt her. But neither did Mr. Parker right. So. You say a lot without having to say a lot. It switches on the mind and I'd love to sit down with you for a few weeks and have a big conversation about this series.
I'm loving this story. It's plausible. Scarily plausible.
Thank for sharing with us.
Please don't ever stop.
Reviewer: Sydney Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 04:24 am
Mind=Blown. Broots has found them hasn't he? And doesn't know it yet! Oh squee! Here we go. Here we freaking go. I can't wait. So freaking excited.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 04:01 am
Holy holy wows! You're really going to follow through, and I was so afraid you wouldn't. Is it difficult to write this? This is Jarod, so, and we know he has that darkness you've always talked about, and he also has such a strong sense of juistice. I know you caught some hell for writing FON in the beginning because he's Jarod and people really thought he was acting within the law all that time, impersonating cops and doctors. Do you know how violated I would feel to learn that my doctor wasn't a real doctor? YOU would. I can tell. Heck I feel violated as it is to see a real doctor who sucks at being a doctor and then charging me tons of $$$$ for doing a shitty job.
The writing is powerful, your prose always is, the narration is .. magnificent. I'm so excited and tingling with emotion. You really have the characters. They are clay in your capable hands. You are a master.
More please? Please don't make we wait too long. Please update your other stories too.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 01:26 am
Bravo! Outstanding work. I've come to expect this quality from you, and excitement. Broots must be beside himself, and might even be wishing he'd caught Jarod for the Centre at the beginning, and avoided all that's happened.
Sydney shines too here. He still wants to protect Jarod, still has those paternal feelings.
I wouldn't mind a scifi twist with Jarod having implanted a tracker inside of Parker. I loved it when they did that on Nikita, the new Nikita, tracking them everywhere and with an option to kill them remotely. It's cool.
Do what you will. Know that I will read it all.
Thank you for writing.
Until next time Mirage,
Ciao!
Reviewer: Michael Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/25 12:53 am
Omfg! Please let Jarod have implanted Parker. Wow. I know we talked about that and you were like, "implausible" but come ON! Please. I know Broots is desperate. Poor baby. I love that the rifle was a bluff by Sydney to see Jarod's reaction. Shrink is gonna shrink am I right? He had to know, needed his insights into Jarod's psyche. "blah blah" Broots is right. Broots nailed it all.
The syringe! I was wondering why they'd be going after MP with a syringe of all things. Broots knows all about Jarod's affinity for needles!! OMFG! They played Jarod. H@ll yeahhhs! They are tracking the syringe. Broots knew Jarod would want it. Makes sense.
The characters are... the characters, so in character. Broots and Sydney are real enough to touch. You really do justice to all of the characters. Oh, snap, I love Sam, too. He's a sweetheart in real life, too and he's Sam in real life too.
MORE
OMG I need more.
[Report This]Date: 27/08/25 09:47 pm
Oh, so exciting and fast paced, and yeah, Jarod could have even chipped her titanium plate when she was injured in Texas. She wouldn't know. A second signal could mean anything so I won't jump to conclusions. You did mention that he has security features on his properties and I wonder if Broots picked them up. SO excited to learn more. I need it now.
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/25 09:11 pm
Amazing amazing 🤩 😍 !They are putting in the same legacy work as when looking for Jarod and you talked about how Sydney was reminder of the old days
...oooh that contrast...when Borots didn't want to catch Jarod and celebrated when he succeeded in keeping his freedom vs now when he's hopeless and angry because he can't find Jarod .. 😭
I love it . A second signal ...omg.
They have found them, I think. I'mexcited for more.
And I love the playful vibes and comaraderie between these two old friends. Amazing.
More please?!
Reviewer: Leslie Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/08/25 05:24 pm
OMG please update this and please update EVERYTHING. Please write something. You are needed and so missed! Are you ok? You're not in the US? You didn't get kidnapped by trumpstein's gestapo did you? You're not in alligator Alcatraz are you? Or else Salvador prison? Are you OK ?please say something to someone. Im worried 😫 scared!
Author's Response:
Hi, I'm okay. Take care of yourself. Thanks.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/25 08:12 pm
Oh no my God that should be *FICS not fucs OMG typos sorry ” ”
Author's Response:
No, no, please don't apologize. "Fucs" is an accurate description of my scribblings. I think I prefer it.
Reviewer: Nooms Signed [Report This]Date: 31/07/25 06:44 pm
Hey hey it's Michael's biggest fan again. I'm looking for one of your fucs. Jarod was dark and chasing Parker and he was bringing women in to some place to audition..and the women were all refugees or something but he was looking for one who looked like Parker, he was Trying to find a stand in for her because he couldn't have her ..but the women all thought they were there for large movie roles and freedom and a lot of money and fame . ..it reminds me of Epstein and Trump scamming and trafficking and raping but your story was Before that news broke so publicly and became widely known and now your fic has disappeared? I think it was called 'devil's advocate' and Jarod was also using drugs. He didn't actually rape anyone in the story but the similarities tho..they got me thinking ..
Please let me know if there's a conspiracy and please update this and all your stories I love them thank you
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 31/07/25 06:43 pm
Please update. I need this so much.
Author's Response:
I will. Thanks, Xena.
Reviewer: Xena Signed [Report This]Date: 24/07/25 03:06 am
