Oh no only 3 chapters!
I'm so dying now.
I need more Mirage!
Hurry. Please update this NOW and all of your stories
I can never get enough!
Reviewer: Christoph Signed



[Report This]Date: 06/09/25 07:23 am
Thank you! For the chapter, for writing my favorite ever series and characters and actors, but also for
Laying down the truth about wealth.
All my life I heard from wealthy people that money doesn't but happiness...and they say that cos they are scared
We will take their money. They're afraid we'll eat them!!
Cos the truth is money does buy happiness, it buys healthcare, dental care, food, warmth in winter, cooling in summer, a pool to cool off in, healthy food that keeps us healthy.
Money.
Buys
Happinesses.
It purchases a get out of jail free card for trump too.
You are so right.
I just want more!
Reviewer: Christoph Signed



[Report This]Date: 06/09/25 07:20 am
😱 Omg forces of nature squeeequel !
I'm so damn stoked!
Reviewer: Christoph Signed



[Report This]Date: 06/09/25 07:14 am
Aww Broots is just beside himself. I feel for him. I love Sydney's attempt to console while trying to be realistic. They're both understandably mourning that their friend is in danger and Sydney must feel some responsibility too for Jarod's behavior. He raised him. It reflects badly. I'm excited for more. So eager but trying to be patient.
More please?
Reviewer: Felicia Signed



[Report This]Date: 05/09/25 05:58 pm
Poor Broots. He feels it so hard tho right. He's the most normal of the gang, he promised, and... oooooohhh he's keeping the promise. I love this. Ialways loved the Sydney-Broots parts of the series. They're such pals, so much love for each other. It's like watching an episode of The Pretender, only this time Jarod really has gone too far. I hope they get Parker back safely and soon. The damage Jarod has done... I'm so excited about how you will approach that. I know you will. You have no fear! You go all IN. I'm going with YOU! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Amelia_ Signed



[Report This]Date: 05/09/25 12:48 am
Broots. He's so torn apart by this. Breaks my heart. It's beautiful the way he loves Parker and always has. So beautiful. I have secretly shipped them at times. That cold dick episode made sense to me. They were so cute.
I'm so completely freaking stoked by this. It's a breath of fresh air, Mirage.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed



[Report This]Date: 04/09/25 11:07 pm
Broots. He's so torn apart by this. Breaks my heart. It's beautiful the way he loves Parker and always has. So beautiful. I have secretly shipped them at times. That cold dick episode made sense to me. They were so cute.
I'm so completely freaking stoked by this. It's a breath of fresh air, Mirage.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed



[Report This]Date: 04/09/25 11:07 pm
I.
Cannot.
Even.
"The nifty portal Parker and Jarod had ducked into in Munich had spat them out onto a private, sprawling Mahébourg estate that could be accessed only by boat or air."
Oomph! Jarod, Jarod, Jarod. Tsk tsk tsk tsk.
So dark.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed



[Report This]Date: 04/09/25 11:03 pm
That third chapter was an amazing surprise. Broots and Sydney! It's so good to see them together and still close. They have Parker's back just like I always knew they would. Broots IS honoring a promise. I hope he takes Jarod down. I have to wonder how that will go. I can't wait to find out. It's so exciting. I was afraid to be excited. I'm a Pretender fan. We've been let down a few times. Our series was canceled. There was a promise of a return. I guess you know the rest.
But you have delivered. Thank you for that.
The only issue I have is that now I have to wait for the next chapter. I hope you continue, and as soon as possible.
Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed



[Report This]Date: 04/09/25 10:57 pm
Jarod. Uhmm. It's Jarod, it's plausible. This sequel is what I've wanted for so long and you have delivered. I was afraid you'd gloss over and .. I dont know. I have faith in you. You always follow through with soild writing, so it's not that. It's just that I know it's hard to write this kind of content. I've tried and failed. I wanted to rush through, have it over with. You aren't rushing. Every word is plausible. It's perfect. It's what I hoped for, and better than I even hoped for. So please continue. Thank you.
Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed



[Report This]Date: 04/09/25 10:54 pm
Yay, Broots and Sydney are still searching OMG!
Broots is seriously done with Jarod's sh!te and I'm here for it!
More please?
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed



[Report This]Date: 03/09/25 09:46 pm
Oh MY GODDESSES!
Jarod is just so sexily evil. Deliciously awful. Looking that good and being that bad. Uh huh! Slays me.
SO much truth and plausibility in every word. The chapters are SOOOO short.
I need longer chapters. You can do it.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed



[Report This]Date: 03/09/25 09:43 pm
Bam! Bravo, and oh, snap, the long long long LONG awaited sequel.
I love this already. So much action. What a thriller!
I'm so thankful that there are 3 chapters all set for me. Only 3 tho. I wish there were more. I want to binge read you.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed



[Report This]Date: 03/09/25 09:41 pm
Congratulations! Oooh I love it!
Please write more. Don't make me break out the whip now.
Because I will if I have to.
Your characters are bang on and the dialog is amazing, heartfelt, such
wholesome moments between two friends and colleagues trying to support
each other while they search for their missing friend.
It's Pretender perfect of course.
Thank you for writing.
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed



[Report This]Date: 03/09/25 05:55 am
More. Now. Please.
Thank you for writing.
Please never stop.
Reviewer: Revenant Signed



[Report This]Date: 03/09/25 01:28 am
Alsways seeing Jarod in these roles and Michael it's so different to the normal Jarod. But not too different as you are right always that he removed a kidney from man without permission and that is assault and doctors can go to prison for that here in my country. this remains plausible and more do and scarier because it is Jarod .
When I first saw Iowa which you might not be familiar with I was startled and I was not startled also.
Freeway felt the same startled but not startled.
This is a fantastico written and the plotting is magnificento!
I want to read more of this now.
I hope Parker will be as okay as she can be when she is away from Jarod again.
The wealth buys power and the power allows this. Just like the Epstein case. All those men, decades of abuse and trafficking, and a lot of people knew and kept it secret. It's realistic. This needs to be written.
Reviewer: Nooms Signed




[Report This]Date: 01/09/25 07:58 pm
Woot woot 🙌🏼 🎉 didn't know there was a third chappie for me to read so I'm so thrilled but now I will have to wait for chappie four.
This is amazing really like everything you write
Pure gold 🥇 every time!
I want more. I need it to bad right now!




[Report This]Date: 01/09/25 03:20 am
Yeppies wealth does buy happiness and looking at what trump has done it also buys escape from accountability
.
You are so spot on!
Can't get enough
More please?




[Report This]Date: 01/09/25 03:17 am
Sweet! Action packed and fast paced but doesn't feel rushed at all.
Top notch writing, mate!
Always so on point!
Top notch!
Reviewer: Jake Signed




[Report This]Date: 31/08/25 07:55 pm
Broots ... he's so cool and I'm a geek too.
I love his tech talk and that he can see that people don't speak his tech language now and
Has to explain it simply to them.
The characters are all spot on!!
I love the action and plot too.
It's all amazing 😍 🤩
More please?
Thank you for writing!




[Report This]Date: 31/08/25 07:38 pm
Woot mirage is back
and better than eva!
You have been missed!
This is so magnificent.
I just want more and more. Please never stop!
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed



[Report This]Date: 31/08/25 05:36 am
Woo Hoo! 😀 🙌🏼
I will sometimes find any Sydney scene dull but damn Broots clapping back and also
the intimacy of friendship they have here . It's wholesome and honest.
It's so real .
The anger and pain .. it's all savagely honest and real. I'm so excited to read more.
Thank you for sharing your gifts with us .
Ta.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed



[Report This]Date: 30/08/25 05:53 pm
Oh Mirage this is so exquisite and well plotted and I'm already completely addicted.
You really just yank me right in and hold my attention.
More please?




[Report This]Date: 30/08/25 06:40 am
Hey I'm so glad you're back on the radar. You have me worried when you are gone for so long.
I hope all is well with you and your significant man.
My last email wasn't responded to ?
I love this, of course. Your writing is solid, the plotting is solid.
It's a solid story all throughout.
The characters are ..THE characters as always.
I eagerly await more.
Love to you.
Update soon please?
Reviewer: Contessa Signed




[Report This]Date: 30/08/25 05:01 am
Please please please
Never stop writing OMG I love it so much.
I could read books and books filled with your writing.
They are so in character and the plot is so thrilling!
I need more right now.
Please hurry and write faster!
I need it so bad!
Reviewer: Joni Signed




[Report This]Date: 30/08/25 02:33 am
