Broots ... he's so cool and I'm a geek too.

I love his tech talk and that he can see that people don't speak his tech language now and

Has to explain it simply to them.

The characters are all spot on!!

I love the action and plot too.

It's all amazing � 🤩

More please?

Thank you for writing!

Woo Hoo! 😀 🙌�

I will sometimes find any Sydney scene dull but damn Broots clapping back and also

the intimacy of friendship they have here . It's wholesome and honest.

It's so real .

The anger and pain .. it's all savagely honest and real. I'm so excited to read more.

Thank you for sharing your gifts with us .

Ta.

Hey I'm so glad you're back on the radar. You have me worried when you are gone for so long.

I hope all is well with you and your significant man.

My last email wasn't responded to ?

I love this, of course. Your writing is solid, the plotting is solid.

It's a solid story all throughout.

The characters are ..THE characters as always.

I eagerly await more.

Love to you.

Update soon please?

I'm so relieved that you updated this and that Broots is closing in on Jarod and can rescue from Jarod Parker...soon. How is she going to react? I'm so excited to know more.

Please hurry.

Please hurry �� �� �� ��

More?

Oomph. This, like everything you write, is amazing.

Reading you is always like watching the series. You bring the characters to life.

Congratulations 🎉.

Thank you for sticking with us

Aggghhhhh Broots. The poor fellow right? I can feel his agony. I can't wait for the gang to be all back together again. Parker is going to need all of the support she can get.

More please? Soon please!

I'm scared but I'm still reading. I love every word that I'm reading. I love how in character they are. It's magical. I feel excitement for more and hope you are writing as quickly as possible.

Ohh this. So much this!

I can't get enough!!!

Broots is still such a sweetie and Sydney is still such a shrink. Brilliantly executed!

Congratulations 🎉 �� �� �� �� 🎉 🎉 ��

Oh, man, I love this. A second signal. They are so in character. I'm watching it instead of reading it I want you to know. You illustrate with words and it's so amazing. I love how Broots sees Sydney's face and stops explaining and just gets to the point. I think of Parker's "skip the tram ride, Broots" lol.

I feel the frustration, the headiness of being so close and still too far, and Broots' real worry for Parker. I feel his deep hatred for Jarod too.

Sydney is such a shrink, as always. Broots isn't wrong about junkies and as someone with personal experience I know that he has every right to distrust a junkie. I'd almost forgotten Broots ever even had a wife. I love the way Broots stood his ground and gave back. Sydney still has that fathers day card, and preaching at Broots about a bias. Lordt. Who is he fooling? Psychiatrist needs to heal himself already.

I love it. You're a hell of a story teller and author. I'm so eager to read more and will wait. IMPATIENTLY.

Jarod has had the time and if anyone could do it... and would anyone here be surprised. The guy had to hallucinate his mum to stop himself from killing a man and he did violate that one man's autonomy by taking out his kidney and it was a skeezy motel. The parallels to rape in a skeezy motel are drawing themselves and I didn't always realize that... it was only after reading you that I went, oh, shit, true dat.

I think Sydney is right that Jarod doesn't want to hurt her. But neither did Mr. Parker right. So. You say a lot without having to say a lot. It switches on the mind and I'd love to sit down with you for a few weeks and have a big conversation about this series.

I'm loving this story. It's plausible. Scarily plausible.

Thank for sharing with us.

Please don't ever stop.

Holy holy wows! You're really going to follow through, and I was so afraid you wouldn't. Is it difficult to write this? This is Jarod, so, and we know he has that darkness you've always talked about, and he also has such a strong sense of juistice. I know you caught some hell for writing FON in the beginning because he's Jarod and people really thought he was acting within the law all that time, impersonating cops and doctors. Do you know how violated I would feel to learn that my doctor wasn't a real doctor? YOU would. I can tell. Heck I feel violated as it is to see a real doctor who sucks at being a doctor and then charging me tons of $$$$ for doing a shitty job.

The writing is powerful, your prose always is, the narration is .. magnificent. I'm so excited and tingling with emotion. You really have the characters. They are clay in your capable hands. You are a master.

More please? Please don't make we wait too long. Please update your other stories too.