oh and I'm never looking at my ski poles again the same way ever. skewer. mankebab. I love Jarod's "don't compose a man kebab, baby" oh, I want to see how they are with each other. I'm glad she's not a stupid TRADwife or stepford wife or any of that crap.
Jarod is gonna want his equal, the woman he fell in love with and that's the badass godess miss Parker. THank you for not changing her or him. This is perfect.
MOre please. I've been wanting you to add more to Forces of Nature for so long now. I didn't think it would happen.
so excited.





Date: 14/01/25 06:19 am
Oh yes bring it. You always deliver.
I know you will bring it home.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed





Date: 14/01/25 04:21 am
Firstly, you're not still in the Santa Monica area are you? I know you had a thing and that you have family there. You specifically mentioned Mulholland, and Malibu, too. Your Aunt that drags you to parties and beaches to meet celebrities is there too? Something about orange county and Santa Anna? I remember the conversation. I hope you're ok. The destruction is nuts. I thought it would be earthquakes. Wow, can't really process it all.
Be safe my friend and fandomly!
Now on to it:::
I never thought I'd live to see the day when you FINALLY wrote us a sequel.
Bribery? It's a pity that you were so unbribeable. I quote you now::: "Even if you offered me all of the money in the world I wouldn't do it. Not now. It doesn't feel like the appropriate moment. I'm sure that some day I will have to revisit this, for better or worse. It's difficult to see the monsters win and escape accountability, but sometimes they do, and, for now, Jarod is one of them."
I'm super stoked that that day has come!
AT LAST!
Thank you. It's brilliant.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed




Date: 13/01/25 09:44 pm
I always knew Forces of nature was a thriller and horror epic. Human nature being the worst part of any nature.
With Jarod the intelligence makes it moreso plausibly.
I always thought it would be horrific moreso if he went darkerest.
He would be unstoppable.
I have a curiosity. I wait impatient and anticipate.
This is already thrilling me Mirage.
The gratitude i have is unspeakable.
Thank you always.
Reviewer: Archange Signed




Date: 13/01/25 08:21 pm
Oh 😮😮😮 😁😁 😁😊
Thrilled af that you are finally freaking writing a sequel...
Wait. Gotta breathe cos I just read Jillian's review... Don't look..the xnx place is hella not safe for work, school, children, or animals..
Ermahgerd!!!
No lies detected in Jillian's review tho.
There is a comment from someone with that first name so... Doesn't mean anything I reckon just that it's all odd
Ok!!!
Breathing over..
I love this.
The way you thrust us into the story .
Oh no now I'm writing in double entendre speak.
The suspense is aroused IYKWIM.
The surge of power from your writing is exciting.
The rush of each turn of a phrase .
The satisfaction is heady and mixed with anticipation for more more more!!
More!!
**Gurgling noises**
The climax will surely...
Ok. Sorry.
😉
😜
Heads all the way gone in the gutter now
You receive the oddest reviews tho but I reckon I don't have to tell you what you already must know.
It's like that time someone put all of those michael t weiss photos on your review to give you some eye candy ...to inspire...
Did you know?
You never responded to that photo review....
Anyhoo
I love this adventure, brilliant writing.
I hope they aren't immediately captured.
I need to see more about their life now before it's tossed upside down and brought crashing down like some post coital depression
Oops.
I'll stop now
Love this
More!
Please
Don't ever
Stop





Date: 13/01/25 06:47 pm
OMG I love it! Finally a sequel..17 god damn years!
Oh I was on xxnx for reasons, and that Iowa movie was on there and it's the scene where Michael T Weiss's es character is rough sexing rosanne Marquette OMG..omg.. there is one comment on that movie and it's from someone named Michael in the US and their comment is "would you like me to do that to you?" and I'm just dead now lol..
You don't think...????
Like ? Do you think?
Anyway. I'm so freaked!!
Please continue this.
As dark as you want to go
I'm so here for it!!
Reviewer: Jillian Signed





Date: 13/01/25 05:47 am
I hope you're not in wildfire path out in California? Are you ok? Take care of yourself.
Reviewer: Rebecka Signed




Date: 13/01/25 03:21 am
Hells to all the yeahs.
A sequel to Forces of Nature has been on my Xmas list for so many years
This is perfect
Thank you love!!
Reviewer: Rebecka Signed




Date: 13/01/25 03:17 am
Oooh. I'm so here for this. Exquisite as always.
Reviewer: Kat Signed




Date: 12/01/25 11:15 pm
I'm certainly stunned right now young lady.
You launch us into their lives by making it clear that Jarod successfully fled the states with Miss Parker and she appears to willing and that drives home the point that his "therapies" have been successful too.
Zachary?
Another dead child? Is he dead?
Oh, I had concerns.
Zachary would be an adult now if I assume correctly that it's been 17 years?
I'm still so invested in this saga.
I want more and more.
Thank you and big congrats !🎉
Reviewer: Imogen Signed





Date: 12/01/25 08:34 pm
Exciting already! Even without a translating app I understood what was happening.
Dark Jarod is baaaaack!
Super excited for this and so grateful.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed





Date: 12/01/25 06:55 pm
I wasn't expecting this so soon after your conclusion of the Unforseen series . I wasn't expecting a dark Jarod return after so many happier normal Jarod stories.
I just accused you of warming up to Jarod and now you do this?
Mirage you are not easy to figure out.
I find this intriguing and action packed, well written. You check all of the boxes as always.
I'm stunned by the dark direction again.
I'm It's reasonable that Jarod wouldn't want to delay anything by saving the child. It was all a set up it seems. A trap. Smart to do that, use Jarod's flaw to catch him. It seems he no longer has that flaw
Sydney is such a scientist. Staring, astonished. So very Sydney.
Brilliant.
Bravo!
Until next time,
Ciao!
Reviewer: Michael Signed




Date: 12/01/25 06:43 am
Ooohhh. Oh! 🤯
You totally never wanted to write a sequel.
I am shocked and so happy. Really proud of you.
This is awesome. My God. You've outdone yourself. Again!!!
Can't wait to see where we go next. I'm all buckled in and ready!
Reviewer: Gunner Signed





Date: 12/01/25 04:20 am
Oh my god! Finally! Thank you. 17 years!
You didn't miss a beat!
I'm so fucking stoked!
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed




Date: 12/01/25 03:35 am
It does seem appropriate now... the way the wealthy class gets away with everything (guilty on all counts, but won't be punished or held accountable in any way-- another strawhair, blue eyed--- it isn't lost on me) I thank you for writing this and I know we've talked about your ideas for this. I can't wait for you to write it all. I have been waiting so long for this.
I also think it's appropriate because I need somethig right at this moment and The Pretender and fanfic has always been my safe space. I had to evacuate from the willdfires in Cali and I don't know what will happen now. I take a lot of comfort in art. You and some others here are keeping me from going nuts right now. It might sound cheesy but I've always run away to hide in other universes, books, movies, paintings when mine got too upsetting.
Your universes are so intriguing, exciting. I can see Parker skiing and focus on that for a while.
Thank you. Art is the way we survive and heal. You are creating art here. You won't believe me. You don't have to believe me. I just wanted you to know. I have to say it anyway. Please never stop writing.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed





Date: 10/01/25 06:35 pm
Ohhh. Myyy. Godddd!
The long long long long awaited SQUEEquel is everything I had wished for!
Plausible.
Terrifying.
Global.
The characters are the characters.
Miss Parker is still the same bad ass. I'm glad she's not a trad wife/stepford robot type.
Even Jarod, sick as he is in this, would want an equal and he wants the OG miss Parker not a slave!
I love this!
More more! Hurry please 🙏❤️.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed




Date: 10/01/25 05:58 pm
17 years! I've waited 17 years for a sequel. You've been so opposed to it. I'm surprise, so frigging happy Mirage.
Broots is going to honor the promise I hope? I wonder if he will find them or honor the promise by trying. It could mean either. I hope he catches Jarod. Time to put the Pretender in prison. This is well timed with what just happened in Murica. It must seem like rapists are popular. They just voted one in for president over there in murica. I get why it seems right to do it now. I love it. I've been wanting this for so long. It has already exceeded expectations.
Congrats!
Reviewer: Ricky Signed




Date: 10/01/25 07:17 am
My first response was Forces of Nature? THE Forces of Nature?!!! OH, my god! I love Forces of Nature, have been wanting you to sequel it for 16 years! Yes!
That's my second response too and my only damn response. I love this. I love this day in the life snapshot and oh my god where is little Zachary? Another? Does that mean?
man-kebab! YES! Parker is bad ass in this. She doesn't know they are trying to save her! How could she know? She and Jarod are so solid here tho. I love skiing in Austria too!
Jarod's words about a safeword are so accurate.
Sydney being "master, mentor, mommy, monster" soooo accurate.
Money buys happiness and so many other privelages. Word! You nail it.
Let me just say that Broots told Jarod he would come after him if he hurt her and I know you love Broots. YOu always have. I'm thankful to you for always including him. You let him shine.
THANK YOU! Oh my god. I need MORE!
Reviewer: Jami Signed




Date: 10/01/25 05:51 am