Oh my goodness  😯😢 😭

and oh my goodness  😂 ðŸ˜� 😀

and oh my goodness 🤯ðŸ˜� 😳  🤣

but not in that order

You speak to all of the emotions and senses and I love it.

Please never stop writing � � �

Thank you.

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Exceptional as always.

You yank my hand and I'm glad you're holding my hand because that was scary and tragic. I was sad for the kid.

I'm excited for more.

Welp. I didn't expect this but I should have. The foreshadowing was strong with this one. We never knew the boy and it's hard to miss him. For me. I know his parents beg to differ
..
And honestly I'm totally desensitized after so many school shootings.

Il love this fic.
I hope this brings the pair closer.
I know they will hurt for a while.
I want more!

Whoa this is fantastic and it's fantragic. I didn't see this coming.

I'm shook. I love it anyway just took me a sec to process that one.

I need to know what happens now. I can't imagine where you'll take me next. I'm willing to go with you for real. Take me along. I'm down for it. You're one of those authors that keep my attention and keep me wondering for a while. You're right up there with the creators of the series. I've been waiting for their next update for 20 years or more. I'll be here ok? Take your time.

I'm just going nuts waiting. But seriously please continue. I love your writing. You know how to weave them.

Did not expect that!

😢

My heart has broken 💔

You write grief so differently and accurately.

It's plausible and still so beautiful even though painful.

Pain 😖 😖 😖

So

Much

Pain

I want to read more.

I hope you'll post more soon ☺� 🔜 hope 🤞 😉 � 🤞 � � �

Top shelf. Continue please.

This was a hard one. You really capture the agony of loss and the relationship, all the nuance and all of it. I'm in awe.

I'm so eager and excited to see what happens next, where they will put the pain and how they will pick up the pieces.

Thank you for sharing with us. I hope you will share more soon

Oh wow wow wow. Continuity. Continuity. Continuity. I'm a stickler for continuity.

I love your Pretender perfect characterizations, the dialogue, the plausibility, the mannerisms, the Jarodisms, the Parkerisms, the Brootsisms, the Sydneyisms, your transition and descriptive work, the natural ability you have to tell a story and write it and above all I love continuity and you bring it. You brought it big time. I love that you're true to canon, the bunnies.

My heart is pieces on the floor and I'm gathering them up now and will get some glue. I'll make repairs. I love this chapter even as heartbreaking at it is.

I hope you'll continue. It's exceptionally out of this world amazing. Thank you. It's a painful pleasure to read you.

Whhoa. Oomph. Right in the Pretender feels!

This is going to be the thing, isn't it, the thing that FINALLY makes her do the right thing. I hope so! Make it so please please please. I love it when you write them together and on the same team. I love it when you write PERIOD but they are my favoured ship and when you do write them on the team you go ALL-IN just like you with eveyrthing you write and make it real and plausible and I see it and I hear them and I feel it all, all of the feels and I know you can do this. You've got this. Please please please. Give it to us. We deserve it.

Thank you thank you thank you thank you with every centimeter of my heart.

I love ths story. "can't keep up with car how will I keep up with a toddler" sounds like every parent I know. You've humanized Parker enough to make her relatable even likable without changing her personality You excel in that area and in not bogging down the story with a lot of extra unnecessary words and ..who am I kidding you excel all around in every area of writing. So addicting, Mirage!

Ohh. Oh. That is wildly tragic firstly. I couldn't stop crying when Parker talked about the bunnies. Oh god Mirage. That's some amazing writing beyond amazing. They are in each other's arms again this time as grieving parents. Any parent would try to find a different reality, anything to have their child alive ...most parents.. the good ones. Some parents are terrible but not Parker and Jarod.

It's brilliantly written. The characters *ARE* the characters. Oh, I'm excited for the next installments.

Thank you for writing and sharing with us dear author. 💕

Don't apologize. I love this. It's sad but death happens and the ghosts and supernatural aspects of this are brilliant. I know you don't believe in ghosts or any of that kooky stuff but you don't let interfere with the story telling. The way you put me in the scene, your ability to illustrate with words and bring the characters to life will always WOW me. You are extraordinarily talented and have natural skills. You have a relentless command of language and characters too.

I wish there was more now.

Thank you thank you thank you!

😮 😯 Oohhh. I've always believed that Briggie was carrying Parker and Jarod's child, and you have dealt us a blow with this.

Parker discovered his death by seeing him and helping with his unfinished business of saying goodbye to his parents and he wanted to give them the ðŸ�‡ bunny 😭 😭 😭 😭  that jarod gave him when he was a baby. I'm just weeping like Jarod and Parker now. The bunnies.. remember the bunnies that Jarod and Parker held when they were young? It always comes back to the bunnies.

You never disappoint. Not yet anyway.

 I appreciate all of your hard work.

More please?