OOooohh a bit of southern gothic stirred into this methinks. I love this. Catherine's voice sounding like gullible amens at a hell-fre sermon. NoooIce. Very nice indeedy Mirage.

Gullible. Amens. Hellfire sermon. I love how the loudest and proudest people preaching hell fire and judging are the most awful 'sinful' human beings who need the most judging. Like Pussygrabber trump's spiritual adviser and child molester and the pussygrabber himself. THe people who amen them are gullible, just plain stupid.

So I like what you've done here. Catherine's voice.. we hear it when she's whispering at Ethan and it's really eager and needy her voice. So..wow, I love that Parker is comparing them. Which means Jarod's like the hell fire preacher here. And Parker's mind would go there.

I love this. I love that her first instinct is to run from being confronted with her feelings for Jarod. Of all the things Jarod has and would accuse her of and confront her with, it's her feelings for him that she fears being confronted with the most.

I so used to wish I'd see this on the screen, word getting back to Jarod of Parker's meeting with the clone and what she'd said. Now I have seen it. I love it. You do big time justice, do right by our characters. Thank you for this.

Another gift from Mirage.

You're the best.

I hope you're well. 

Love to you and thank you.

I wait as patiently as I can for more.

I have chill bumps all over my body right now and it's YOUR FAULT!!

This is a tragic series and fandom and this story is already touching on tragic themes and it's drama and action and suspense but also Comedy gold. I mean... damn, skippy!

"wtf m radio WFTM What. The. Fuck, Mom.  radio."

"I had the audacity to accuse Broots of losing the plot"

"shut up. Both of you."

"inner yes. Sense, mm not so much"

"I run. You chase. Okay?"

I'm over here laughing my bloody arse off Mirage and nearly crying, too.

Broots. Again with Broots. You love Broots. I love Broots. Everyone loves Broots. It should be a spin off. Everyone Loves Broots. People are meh Miss Parker sometimes. And you're meh with Jarod sometimes. But we all agree on Broots. He is innocent and should be protected at all costs. Am I right?

Are you in love with Broots?

Are you in love with Jon Gries? You can tell me. I won't tell him. Your secret will be safe with me.

I'm playing wit ya. You love everyone. We know that already. I think it's important that he's in all of the stories, to make up for how he was left out of the novels. Shame about that.

I love this, and I'm totally out of my mind stoked to read it and heavily anticipating more. Please keep going.

Oh, m'petite this is amazing. You are a natural born author with a gift. I feel excitement like I've never felt before. It is similar to watching a new episode and wondering what will be next.

I'm too excited for more!.

More please?

Hey now Mirage👋 omg I'm so here for this. A new story is exciting af and you just keep on besting yourself, getting better and better, and leaving me hungry for more and more! I'm already so addicted. This is perfectly plausible with what we know about the inner sense and broots mentioned "has anyone seen that little kid around?" in the IOTH episode so the baby seemed to be missing even then. Parker looking for family, realizing how Jarod and his family felt all those years ...wow. I'm so stoked ðŸ˜� ðŸ˜� to see how it plays out. 

Congrats on the new idea and a job fantastically done already 🎉

I'm thankful for you and so appreciative.

More please?

With sugar on top and cherries? �

Whoa! Yes! I've always wanted you to explore more of the inner sense aspect of the series, was curious how you would go about it. I know in FON you basically dismissed it and any scifi in it was all human nature at it's worst.

So this is a fresh and new. I'm super freaking excited for this!

Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/06/24 10:50 pm

I am speechless right now and feeling the old time pretender feelings . It's like a nostalgia but exciting like a new episode is out now. You have written ne the new episode.

It is magnificent Mirage!

Thank you

Thank you

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Reviewer: Jana Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/06/24 01:07 am

Autocorrect or something added the word "victims" to my review lol. All of it is what I typed. I love and smell all of it. 😘

I'm so here for a new Mirage saga! The characters are all on point. I'm curious about how you'll write Jarod's family and the living arrangements. So far you've written that aspect differently compared to others. They don't all happily reside in one house when you write them, and I love that realism. Parker is someone who is used to being alone. You seem to understand that, too, and the difficulties it presents.

I'm glad you're exploring her vulnerability. I think it would be difficult to write her, but especially when care is needed to portray her accurately. You excel at finding a balance. You understand it all apparently I can tell by the care you're taking to be specific about what is going on with her. She knows she doesn't want to be frantic like her mother sometimes was or like Ethan. She's struggling to appear normal, her idea of normal, while young through this. Her baby brother being gone is enough to drive her crazy, alone. The voices and the rest of it, any one of those could push a person off the edge. It's all happening to her at once like traumatic events do sometimes.

It really hit that Ian is watching her pull the gun and scream at Jarod.

She didn't want the kid to know. I don't blame her.

Jarod forcing her to confront her feelings this way, his seeking confirmation is amazing. He's desperate, has been wanting to see her. It's implied that they haven't seen each other for a while and he's happy to see her again after wondering if he ever would. It's apparent that he wants the truth about her feelings before she avoids him again. He's not going to chase her. He makes that totally apparent. I love that he isn't chasing her, doesn't chase her at all in this story. He seems miffed that she thought he would chase her.

I laughed out loud when he refreshed her memory about who chases and who runs .

This is bloody awesome in short and I can't wait to read the rest of it .. which I know you are busy writing as fast as you can.

You are good to to the serie and better with each new work. The command you have of language and character and plot is incredible. I always do want to read more of your works. You make it hard to wait for more.

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Holy holy holy wows please continue!

This is amazing already. I've always wanted to see Parker trying to cope the the inner sense and there would be some similarities to Ethan but she was able to learn from his mistakes and seems more in control, even if freaked by all of it. You rock my world with this. WTFM radio lol hell yes tho! I love what the abbreviation means alld spelled out. Miss Parker humor is all over that.

She's difficult for many to write but you have a natural way. You show the vulnerability, shuddering in the heat and contrast it with her angrily dropping her hands. She can be childlike with petulance and scream in teenage rage and somehow still reveal strength. You have mad skills! Blows me away!

Thank you for this treasure!

I can't wait for chapter 2!!