Ooh oohhh! Yes! 😊 The more Mirage to read the merrier!
You have have me at the first word and I know you won't let me go until the last word.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/06/24 05:53 am
*whistles* This is a solid first chapter. Does it feel awkward for you to write them so in character? They are scarily, eerily, uncomfortably, spot on themselves. How do you do that? Top shelf as always. I pray you'll keep writing.
Reviewer: richie Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 05:32 am
This is a pleasant and exciting surprise. You just completed one series, are writing a second one at the moment, still working on several other brilliant stories and I'm amazed if I'm able to write a review lol. You bring quantity AND quality. You're a virtuoso, a Pretender in your own right. I hope you'll continue to update and add more stories. I love them all.
Reviewer: valerie_ Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 05:20 am
Woot! Oh, snap, this picks up from Carthis and you keep the continuity and consistency with the first line. The emptiness. (present the Centre gave them is what Jarod said in Carthis) It's a nod and a reminder. I love the thread of continuity that continues through this.
I love how shook and ashamed Parker is that Ian is watching her pull the gun and she wants to stop and her mother wants her to stop but she's struggling with trust because of the training.
I love how shook Parker is when Jarod talks about Ian and confronts Parker with her own words. I love the dead on accurate characterisations and plausibililty and that you're writing and I love everything about this. I need more. I crave so much more Mirage. Please make it so.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 05:07 am
Woo hoo! Mirage. A new Mirage story is unexpected and always welcome! Is this going to be a too good be to be true Jarod? He's in white and in light! Uhhh. Will there be romance? I have so many questions. Please answer them all in the story. I can't wait. I can't wiait. I've said it before and I'll say it again. You should be writing the script for The Pretender. For real for real!
Reviewer: twisted Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 04:18 am
The way you write, word selection and placement, descriptions, characters, it's all so lyrical and illustrative and I can't even think after that. The characterisations are spot on, on the nose, pretender perfect. Oh MY GODDDESsses. More, please?
Reviewer: Thara Nicole Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 03:47 am
Sublime. I'm in awe. This could easily be an episode of The Pretender. Easily!
The dream will never die if we keep it alive. Keep going please!
[Report This]Date: 27/06/24 03:10 am
Heya! awesomesauce with a extra amazingsauce. You rock. I'm super excited for this. A new Mirage story. I hope it's a long one. I love the sagas. You saga brilliantly. Please give me more of this. I'm totally here for it. Thank you. Thank you for the response to my review. You're super sweet and not scary at all.
Reviewer: Jami Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 03:04 am
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Exceptional work. You have reached through the screen and taken my hand and yanked me inside this universe, an amazing Pretenderverse. The characters are meaty, so fleshy, real and on point. The descriptive work is beautiful. I can smell that earth, all of it. The plotting work is remarkable. Please continue this.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 02:50 am
Gorgeous, Mirage. You're holding things in balance well, injecting a certain delicacy. What seems impossible for me seems to come so easy for you. The descriptive work is stunning. A completely captivating read and this is first chapter. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.
Thank you for sharing your natural gifts.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 02:35 am
This is Pretender Gold mate! The way you set it up and pull it off. Keep going!
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 02:28 am
You didn't answer my review of Rupture but it's ok. I still love you.
This is awesome work. Yours always is. More, please?
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 01:39 am
Stunning work. The characterizations are spot on, and Jarod... oh my God, Mirage. They're all real enough to touch, see, and hear.
The thing about Jarod is he has this certain something, a quality or something . when he's pleading with Ethan, with Alex, with who ever, and talking about hope. You bring that out too in him when you write him. I can almost see his eyes shining with that hope and passion.
Yes. All of the characters are fleshed out enough that I swear I can see them. You bring them to life.
This all plausible too. In this canon canondom. The inner sense is real to the canon. I've got goosebumps girl!
I want more.
Thank you for writing this and sharing with us.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 01:36 am
Oh my LORD honey, I need more of this in my life, like all of the time. Bring it.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 27/06/24 01:13 am
Oh awesome Mirage so awesome. I have excitement rushing through me now, in my blood, all up and down my spine.
I can't wait for more. Please write quickly. I love this.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 09:54 pm
Oh, the old, old Pretender feelings are being stirred up by you again. It's like being young and watching The Pretender on TNT and Dark Angel. OMG. I'm seriously more excited than I've been in ages. Please continue. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Gem Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 06:47 am
I'm a fish on your hook Mirage. You reel me in every time. I am excited for more. Please! Merci!
Reviewer: Garbiella Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 04:52 am
Just poppin' in to say I'll be reading more of you. Jami sent me here. This is solid writing and I like that it follows the series. The novels that were released alienated me in ways I didn't expect.
This is a short chapter but I understand quality over quantity, and you probably have a life. I enjoyed this.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 04:13 am
This is HOT and intense and omg. They didn't even touch but the chemistry.. is just like it is on the tv series. You can see the smoke already. I want to see some flames eventually too. Bring the smut or at least some sex. I can't wait. Another Mirage story! YES!!
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Sammi Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 02:36 am
Oh, my! Yes, yes. Peripeteia means turning point, or sudden change in direction or situation, and OMG are you doing what I think you're doing? I hope you are! Is Parker going back with Jarod now? Please make it so! I need more now. I'm too excited. Thank you!!
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 01:34 am
Another compelling story. You balance alll of the elements superbly, capture the dynamics and nuances with ease. You have a natural talent and gift for writing and I'm thankful that you're sharing with us.
Reviewer: Ricky Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 01:27 am
This This This
This! THIS!
All of this! Juicy stuff and it's just beginning. They are super in character.
I'm so stoked and so totally here for this.
More please?
Reviewer: Felicia Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 01:18 am
This is exciting and sooo exquisitely written. The fandom is very very very much alive. Can't keep The Pretender down. This is still the best damn television series and it can't die. Don't let it die. We can't let it die. Our actors are the best actors! These are the best characters. You write them perfectly. I want more. So much more. I'm so excited. More please?
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/06/24 01:09 am
Woot! A new fabulous story after just adding a series update. Yes, please, and thank you to you please.
I love everything about this, and these butterflies in me are going nuts.
Thank you thank you thank you and more please?
Reviewer: Revenant Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 12:51 am
Amazing work here. You really keep them in character and it's all so wonderful and I want more.
About your review response in RUPTURE. Yes, I didn't know where that picture was taken and wanted to find out so I could go there. I want to meet Michael.
I didn't meant to put you on the spot. I'm harmless. I found the picture online at Dr. Mike's days ago and I now I know where it was taken. Patrick's. REally green there. SO now I know.
Sorry.I didn't mean to make you uncomfortable by asking weird questions.
I hope you will keep writing. You rock!
Reviewer: Nooms Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/24 12:20 am
