There you go besting yourself again, keep getting better and better. Oh, god I can't with you right now. I'm so blown away. All of the oomph right now! I need more and more. Please never stop writing. You bring back the emotions and that... those special feelings that makes it feel like things are possible like it used to be when I watched The Pretender in the evening and had to wait for more episodes. You're my episodes now. I need you like I need breath. I'm thankful for all you have written. I hope you know that. You keep the dream alive.

I want my sexy Michael pics to show for you and you Mirage you can tell me which more is doable and sexy sexy sexy sexy hot

take all the time you need and let me know

ii hope you eeenjoy the pics as much as I do I'm the biggest fan and love them all and hurry and write and then get a selfie with him. U should video record yourself with him it will be cute and get a crush on him that would be cute 2!

my pic of sexy Micheal didn't post damn damn damn Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/24 05:11 am

Stunning, Mirage. I had to search online to learn about wound vacs and now I see that this ties in with the wound deshisence from the Incursion update . Parker has ripped out her stitches and has damaged the skin so much that doctors have to close the wound with this wound vac. Stitches do look like spiders in a way... you really dot your i's and cross your t's. I'm so amazed. I need more.

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Ohh ohhhh Oomigoddesses! Jarod walking that walk knowing what he had to do when he reached his destination, her, is such a Jarod move, and he loves her so much that he asks her how badly she wants him to leave. He gives her the choice and it's only because he loves her that he does that. Girl, write faster! � I'm an addict!! 😎 😎 AddictedReviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/24 08:02 am

Woot! uhhHUH!

I need more right now please and thank you Queen! 👑 �

Ohh 😯 😮 this is beautiful and tragic. I wasn't sure which direction you'd take and I'm so happy with this one. It's Miss Parker. We know she isn't a fan of doctors, shrinks, hospitals, and this continues what we know about her already. She's difficult and doesn't play well with others and I can see all of it happening.

I love that you give all characters their due, and keep them in character. Jarod and Parker are themselves here. And let me just say Broots is stand out here. You let him be full Broots like no other writer. He isn't just goofy or geeky and you show the rest of them. I love it..You also say there are no small roles and then you write it like you mean it. Amazing.

Thank you for writing and sharing!!

Please write more ASAP.

I thought this said rApture at first and was like huh mirage caught religion? but it's RUpture which makes perfect sense. Everyone is torn apart, a wound vac is putting Parker's ruptured hand together again, Broots is having a row with Jarod and Beth and god...Jarod and Parker's relationship just burst open, trust has ben ruptured cos he can't even get near her now. Stuff in her mind is all ruptured. I think all of their hearts are ruptured too. Sydney was the glue holding everyone together. This is tragic and beautiful.

I love it.

Thank you for writing it and sharing it

More please?

Solid story all the way! The writing and story telling are solid and skillfully done and this series of yours could be an episode or series continuation easily. You are a natural wordsmith and know how to command a captive reader.

I'm all yours. I'm impatient for more but I know real life can be a pain. I'll be here waiting.

Wow, oh my god, I love this, and I love how Jarod handled that in his own clever way like no one else can to help her while being unable to personally help her as her doctor and psychiatrist. Jarod Jaroded like Jarod often does Jarod. WoW.

"See you at home."

Mind=blown.

You show us what happened and then you showed us the aftermath of the storm that IS LYLE. I didn't know if you'd stay with it, take us through the trauma and all of the pain and her recovery but you're doing it. I know it would have been easier to leave out these details and move from Incursion to Parker all healed and looking back in restrospect but we get to be there with her and I have been curious to know what that would look like.

I think she would refuse Jarod's help, try to escape. The history between them and their feelings for each other... all of that tension would make it harder for them both. He can't even take ONE step in her direction without her wanting to attack out of fear. Wise of him to do it this way. Giving her a choice. I think I'd choose to stay at the hospital if I were her. I wonder what she will do. Can't wait to read and find out. 

I can't wait.

Hello there, oh, I love this so much. You go straight to the heart and soul every time and flesh out the characters and immerse me into the scene so I can smell that hallway with Jarod and it's like I'm watching the story instead of reading it.

He stocked the place wiith banned books so she'd have something to read. She loved books as a child with her mom and he knows that and she has to still love books. I love that. You give me everything and then sprinkle some extra special Mirage love on top. You're the best.

I hope you are doing well, with what's going on with your significant person. Take care of yourself.

This is exciting, each installment gives me the old Pretender feelings I had growing up. You're not old enough to remember having to wait months for a new season and weeks for a new episode.

We were so hot for it, there was an urgency, it was special. I have those same feelings again, that NEED for more. You're damn amazing. I can't get enough.

I'm speechless. I love this. It's painful but it's also beautiful, and breath taking. I love it.

I wish you would publish all of the Mirarchives.

More please?