More. I need more of this now!
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/03/25 10:03 pm
Ooh such a tiny scoop of a chapter, and every word delicious. Please update soon. I'm hooked.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed [Report This]Date: 04/03/25 06:10 am
I'm blown away by the first chapter. Fantastic work.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed [Report This]Date: 04/03/25 06:09 am
Terrific follow up. I'm loving this.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead Signed [Report This]Date: 01/03/25 04:38 am
Brilliant work.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead Signed [Report This]Date: 01/03/25 04:36 am
Love! 💞 💞
I still think you're voice in this is very j d Salinger in catcher in the rye
It's so awesome.
I want more!
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 01/03/25 04:22 am
Strange Bedfellows indeedy my sister in christ! A whole vast DeliveranceVille stuffed with Amerinazis. If only this were fiction. Some of my dystopian ladies here are too on the nose. It's like you saw it coming. I love it. Your voice is amazing and raw. Don't stop now.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/25 10:08 pm
Wow, hell of a first chapter. You can count me ALL the way in! You called it, didn't you? All of my dystopian ladies here have called it.
This is raw and really savage, like Stephen King, Philip Dick, and J D Salinger had a child and this fic is their child. I love it.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/25 10:03 pm
Oh wow this is awesome. Lyle's so right. It would take something like the shitstorm going on to bring an alliance between Lyle and Jarod. Amerinazis is hella freaking appropriate, led by space karen and offender-in chief. basic training rejects. I read Gravy Seals somewhere online but basic training rejects is funnier I think.This is so intriguing. You've got the characters down pat too. Such a treat. I'm glad I read it. I hope to read more soon. Hint hint psst pssst.
Reviewer: Xena Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/02/25 05:05 am
I just got the notification that you reviewed me. I thank you for that.
I came here to see to read your review of my story, and I saw that you have a story as well. What an amazing and exciting story it is too! I love this. I've read both chapters but will give you a proper review of each chapter.
This one is amazing. It was almost a 'haha can't happen here' kind of funny but since Jan. 6 2025 it seems you were being a prophet with this, and it's not nearly as funny now. You have described a real shithole country shitstorm and that's what is happening in real life.
Brilliant writing all the same. I love it.
Reviewer: Xena Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/25 05:01 am
Shit. This is awesome. It's happenening in Texas and Georgia just like you've written. Girls have to travel out of state for an abortion lol and many of the people having to travel voted for people who are against abortion so they were kind of asking for it really but what they wanted then isn't what they want. You nailed the hypocrisy and religious hypocrisy too. Update pelase.
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/24 10:22 pm
I'd like to see this continued. It reminds of Catcher in the Rye in some ways and I want to know more about the narrator too
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 15/10/22 05:21 pm
I was put off when I saw post-rebirth because I read enough rebirth and luke to hate those novels and don't consider them canon. They're like fanfic written by the creators and I think their names listed as fanfic authors here makes my opinion more concrete. After reading I took the post-rebirth warning as your way of saying we've moved on from there and you won't be including any of those characters or references I hope from those novels. I hope you won't. As this is I like that you explore the what if of the orange former Florida retiree P****Y grabber criminal rapist. That "Oz" guy...not the wizard of, but the quack running for election now must be in charge of the food because dogs in hot dogs.. he's a dog torturer and killer. Great job with this.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 11/10/22 08:26 pm
well done ✅. The idea to put dogs in hot dogs must have been Asmet "dr." Oz the mass dog killer's idea.? This needed to be written and I'm ashamed I didn't think of it myself.
Reviewer: Jami Signed [Report This]Date: 10/10/22 03:48 am
I see what you did there, and I like it. Real dogs in hot dogs is a terrible mental image. It's interesting to me that I know who you're talking about without naming "Dear Leader." I read 1984 and Animal Farm and all of the classics regarding this kind of subject but never really thought I'd see so many willfully ignorant people jump on the red hat bandwagon. Well done.
Reviewer: Michael Signed [Report This]Date: 08/10/22 02:34 am
