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Title: Chapter 1

Young lady this is a compelling story from the first word. You're the one that always draws me back. Splendid work as always. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Young? Ha. I'm not that young.

 Reviewer: Ricky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/22 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, squee! I was missing you something awful and I'm so glad you're back...and back with a new action-packed masterpiece. I'm so addicted. More  please?



Author's Response:

I missed you too. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Renea.

 Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/22 11:29 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Congrats! Oooh right in the shipper feels with this. I was hoping she would make an appearance. I'm so grateful to you for writing and sharing your natural talents with us. Please continue.



Author's Response:

I'm grateful to you for sharing your thoughts. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lisa.

 Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/22 08:04 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I hope you're writing quickly. I'm spellbound and can't get enough. You're the best.



Author's Response:

I'm writing quickly- when I have time to actually sit. Thanks for the R&R.

 Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/22 06:53 am
Title: Chapter 1

Aces, Mirage. Please don't stop here. I love the action and fast paced drama, the prose, the dialog, all plausible and in character. You're a hell of a storyteller and author, and dare I say it the best!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jake.

 Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/22 12:52 am
Title: Chapter 1

You never fail to excite and astonish with your intriguing plotting, clear dialogue, profound insights into the characters, and your unwavering command of language. I read this transfixed and I'm worried for Broots. Is he ok? I await eagerly for the next installment.



Author's Response:

Broots, I'm sure, will be okay. Eventually. I hope. We shall see. Thanks for reading and reviewing, needlepoint.

 Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/22 06:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1

You're a paragon! Got your hooks all the way in me. Please say you'll continue this. Take all the time you need. You've always been worth the wait, which only sounds dramatic. I've never had to wait too long for you to update. Thank you for keeping the series and characters alive!



Author's Response:

Are you certain that you reviewed my scribbling? It's just a scribbling. No big thing. Thanks for reading, and for the entirely-too-generous review.

 Reviewer: Kayla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/10/22 11:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Magnificent!! I love how snarky-dark Jarod can be, brings back memories of him in the bank with miss p getting up all up in her space, his lips in her hair. Shiver... You're the best! Thank you for this and all your work. Please never stop writing for us!!



Author's Response:

Aha, thank you for providing that example of Jarod deliberately being an (in)complete weirdo. So, we all did watch the same dvds, after all, and I don't own a one-of-a-kind darkJarod edition Pretender dvd box set. Thanks for that. And thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

 Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/10/22 04:44 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh 😯 oh I love the plot, action, writing, all of it!!! Need more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the r&r, TheDarkAngel.

 Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/22 07:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Twenty years without a go to hell and now you want my help..like everyone else.... ohooh he's seething I love it! You've exquisitely and perfectly captured the characters and the heart, soul, and spirit of the series. I crave more! Please update everything!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Leslie.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/22 03:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

"Oh, right, protection," Jarod purred, nonchalantly tossing the gun aside. He sidled closer to Parker, and whispered into her hair, "Protection. Tell me," he drawled, "how's that working out for you, hmm?"

 

That says it all for me, and I'm hooked like a fish. More! Merci.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Garbiella

 Reviewer: Garbiella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/22 02:48 am
Title: Chapter 1

Holy wow amazeballs Mirage. More please?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the r&r, Cal.

 Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/22 02:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

Action packed and fast paced. Oh oooh you are incredibly talented. I can't even. More?



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Thanks for the r&r, April L

 Reviewer: April L Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/22 10:24 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Impressive. Your writing and plotting is superior and insightful, and the characters are the characters. You're a clever one. I know you'll be updating soon. Won't you?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Monica.

 Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/22 08:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Sublime. This is just everything and I'm totally here for it. Thank you. More, please?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the r&r, nopiupiroie.

 Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/22 01:02 am
Title: Chapter 1

First rate, as always Mirage. Cheers, Mate.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the r&r, Jeremy.

 Reviewer: Jeremy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/22 09:15 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, wow, so much wow. You're in peak form. You caught my attention with the title and that first thrilling sentence throws us into the action. I love it. You plot and develop the characters while transitioning seamlessly and do it all masterfully. I know that Parker doesn't really plan to kill Broots. She would kill  him herself if she wanted him dead, so I'm super excited to see what you have planned for us. I wait impatiently. Amazing work as always.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Miss Shanon.

 Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/22 08:16 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I forgot to rate

 Reviewer: Jillian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/22 07:25 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Don't mind me while I'm over here jonesing for more. Your insights into The Pretender, characters, dynamics et all are profound. You've mastered of the art of writing and perfect brevity. I've read so many stories that bore me to tears with details and that I DNF but you make me want to keep reading and leave me wanting more at the end. I bow to you! Thank you for writing and sharing your natural gifts and skills with us.



Author's Response:

Haha, jonesing, huh? Thanks for the r&r.

 Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/09/22 07:25 pm
Title: Chapter 1

 ðŸ’¯ Your writing is tenacious and bold. Really sharp. It grips my hand, gets under my skin, and demands I pay attention. This is well crafted as all your stories are. I like how fresh your ideas are and it's amazing to see how you execute them, always surprising me. You're such a refreshing shift. I've read a many stale plots but you....YOU always leave me wanting more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/22 01:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

A new 🆕 Mirage novel or novelette? Ohh I am so here for it. You yank me in and never let go and I always come back for more. Please update this and all of your novels soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lacy

 Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/22 03:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

Excellent sentence and story construction, smooth transitioning, pitch perfect characterisations, and most importantly a compelling and original attention grabbing plot. Two decades since Carthis means this is story is happening... NOW. Yes. Hell yes! More more more. Hurry up and write.



Author's Response:

I'm hurrying. Thanks, Shauna.

 Reviewer: shauna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/22 01:41 am
Title: Chapter 1

Top notch mate, this is a tight af story you've got.



Author's Response:

Thanks, dude.

 Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/22 01:04 am
Title: Chapter 1

Exquisite, Mirage. You always leave me begging for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Felicia.

 Reviewer: Felicia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/09/22 10:27 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This is just wow .. so mesmerizing and professionally written and edited, and you are actually an author offline, too. I can tell. I'd love to read any of your books. I love all of your stories here too. My favorite series meets my favorite author and I'm glad you watched this series and became a fan of it because if you hadn't been a fan ...I hate to think of no new Pretender stories, none as intriguing and exquisite as yours. More, please, and thank you. I'm really grateful that you're writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Joni.

 Reviewer: Joni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/09/22 08:45 pm
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