I can't help hoping for a happy ending for them and hope that you'll write the novels. Thank you for continuing to breathe life into this series. ๐’— Congratulations on another fantastic story that has kept my attention and you always leave me craving more.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/11/22 09:47 pm
She's asking to Jarod to help her help Broots which I think caught Jarod by surprise. He's still in love with her I hope.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 04/11/22 09:44 pm
I love your story telling, writing style, and momentum, and you have perfected the art of writing..
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 04/11/22 09:42 pm
Oh this is too awesome!
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 04/11/22 09:40 pm
Timed perfectly with Halloween and what could be more scary than what you've written? Not much. I can't wait for Jarod to do what he does best. Revenge. This time with Miss Parker at his side I hope.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed [Report This]Date: 01/11/22 05:33 am
Bravo ๐‘๐! You balance plot, adventure, superb storytelling, and momentum beautifully.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed [Report This]Date: 01/11/22 05:30 am
Explosive writing! Powerful like always.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 31/10/22 11:42 pm
I'll never understand how you're able to write them so in character. You've mastered the craft of storytelling and writing and you never disappoint.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 31/10/22 11:38 pm
All treats this Halloween ๐! Top notch.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 31/10/22 11:35 pm
I love that he still knows her so well and the character growth and oh my Goddesses all of it. More please ๐
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 31/10/22 03:44 am
Congratulations ๐ ๐‘! Oh, I love this. Please continue!!
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 10:43 pm
๐ awesome I love it. Woot another chapter awaits me!
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 10:30 pm
Perfectly executed. This is top notch, mate! Cheers!
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 04:41 pm
Before the review also wanted to follow up about something else from your response to my review of chapter 2. A nicer neighborhood? So you like the actor. It's the 'ageing like wine' truism am I right? So on to my review of chapter 4 omg I hope Jarod blows it up and wouldn't mind if lyle got his just desserts either. I would creep myself out trying to write horror like this and you pulled a Hitchcock by not letting us see/read what Broots saw and what Jarod and Miss P saw through Broots' eyes but we know Lyle disemboweled Haliah in a way that would enable him to conceal incisions ..the 2 bottom orifices? Yeeeikes! It's so like Lyle. More soon please?
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 06:03 am
Oh, wow, you really are an exceptional author. The characters are so accurate I get chills, and you just have that thing that makes an author an author.You know what I mean?
I want to ask about your response to my other review. You " emerged "from the Rickroll /rabbit hole with "heavy liner, leather spike wristbands, a crush on Kate Bush and George Michael, and the uge spit on Reagan's grave." I couldn't stop laughing. You are a comedian . Reagan was terrible. The boss is right! Ooh I have more chapters to read. Squee! Thank you!!
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 05:51 am
I hope Jarod blows it to bits.. shame Lyle won't die too. You know how to grab my attention and hold it and keep me excited for more and you really know what you're doing. Keep doing it.
Reviewer: Kayla Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 03:25 am
I could read you forever. This is seriously some awesome writing. The chapters are so short tho but that's my only gripe.
Reviewer: Kayla Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 03:22 am
Jarod should totally blow up Lyles house! I can't wait to see what happens next. It's like waiting for the next episode of The Pretender.... actually it's exactly like that! That's how freaking amazing you are!!
Reviewer: Cal Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 12:38 am
Oh how I love this..if I count the ways but there are so many. I love how Jarod changed his tone. He's always had a soft spot for Parker. You create these perfect portraits with your writing and really capture the characters. I agree with twisted. You should have written the novels. Please keep writing for us!
Reviewer: Cal Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/10/22 12:33 am
I've got catching up to do. You surprised me updating so quickly! I love this! More!
Reviewer: Cal Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 12:28 am
You know Jarod will want to blow up something of Lyle's instead of any other options. Does this mean Broots is going to have a fake death in the explosion? I can't wait for more. Thank you to the moon and back for sharing your gifts with us. ๐’
Reviewer: Jami Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/22 10:53 pm
That's definitely Lyle's work and oh so much horror and sorrow. No wonder Broots is losing it. I love that Jarod wants to be explosive ๐งจ with it! Oh my God are Jarod and Miss Parker AKA me finally gonna do a thing together to bring down the baddie?? !!!! Bank was as close as we ever got to seeing that but I want to see it with snacks ..some new thing Jarod hasn't tried that Miss Parker also hasn't tried...??!! And sex?? They should do that too! More?! I'm so excited ๐!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/22 10:21 pm
Wow, you're updating quickly and each chapter is crisp, professional, beautifully plotted and you don't let the quality writing interfere with the story telling. The characters are so real and true to the ones I know and love that I just can't even...I think I'm gonna cry ๐ญ. Thank you for doing justice to the series, the characters..and my namesake.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/22 10:15 pm
Ooh. You delivered on Halloween ๐ like Poe or Lovecraft but with some Stephen King and Anne Rice mixed in. So stunning the way you describe the scene, Jarod joining Broots and Haliah and being there...wow. Broots and Jarod both wantibg to reject the girl is dead. The way you say what happened and where the incision is without saying it. You are the best. Jarod loved blowing up Lyles car he would want to blow up his house too More!
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/22 05:53 am
