WOW. Oh my god I love this. Mind=blown. *bows*

More please?

Bravo, young lady! You've outdone yourself again. Not too young, I hope? I worry about things like that.

Is Faraijii truly a baddie? I'm curious to know if this story is set in our timeline. I want to believe it is. 

Jarod's indignation is tempered with relief that Parker and Sydney are safe with his father, but Parker clearly isn't safe. I know she was actively and intentionally avoiding Jarod during the first several chapters following his capture, and he finally found her in the previous chapter. She's still avoiding him then, allowing him to believe she left.

It stands to reason he will be back at full indignation when he discovers she's very much in danger and still inside the Centre.

Will he seek her again? I want to know what that looks like. I'm very eager to to see what it looks like and plead that you go that route.

Those two back at the Centre at the same time while both in danger .. is something that I think many fans would crave. I know they've both been at the Centre at the same time to rescue Broots (Darkness Fallling) and to close the Centre down in your stories (also Darkness Falling) but to both be back essentially as prisoners...wow. What will that look like?

Show me please!

I love it. I love you.

I love this! More please?

Until next time Mirage,

Ciao!

Ok now just hear me out.
Faraijji can't be all that bad. And even Jarod's like *shrugs at least Parker, Sydney and Angelo are ok*

Perfect chapter. I'm stoked for more and I know you're writing more now as quickly as your little fingers can!!! YES!!!

Please �� don't let them hurt Angelo.

I don't mind that Jarod and Parker are stuck together at The Centre. It's intriguing and I'm excited to read that part.

I love the emotions between Jarod and Parker and that she didn't deny Jarod's words. Ooooh. Powerful.

Please remember to let Angelo be ok.

So exciting. I love the Centre aspect more than I ever loved to see the Jarod pretending aspect. I love that you will be writing both. Finally. I love it. So excited for more.

Oooh this is unexpected. The feelings-reveal here is so beautifully subtle. Parker didn't argue or deny. Oh my shipper heart.

I can't imagine what will happen now. Those two seem stuck for now. I don't mind that. It's intriguing that they will be inside the Centre together. I would like to see them interact more but I also understand why Parker avoids Jarod.

Jarod "cutting anger with comfort, lacing words with kindness"/ "that drug Parker has come to crave" damnnn what a way you have with words. It's mesmerizing, you wordsmith you.

I crave more of YOUR drug, your stories.

I hope you are doing well, still coping ok? Care-taking a loved one, especially when it's a long term commited romantic relationship, is hard. It gets complicated in so many ways I know from personal experience. I'm not young like you but I can imagine it's really hard ..you both are still you enough to have those romantic physical feelings but it's so confusing when you're also the one helping him with other personal things. I was actually married to mine and although it was a vow in sickness and health but it was hard to separate my mind and have those romantic feelings. I could care for him, do any bathing and hygiene care for him but our sex life ended. I had no physical attraction to him any more. I felt guilty too. I'm telling you this now so you will be kinder to yourself than I was to myself.

I even had an affair but he never knew. I've sent you links to a support group on fb it's mostly old widows and I'm the youngest at 54 but we are real about the hard stuff. If you need to talk I'm here.

Take care of yourself.

I remember when Parker learned of what happened to Timmy to create Angelo and how she knelt beside him and they cried. OMG. This tearful scene when Jarod tells her that they chipped Angelo first takes me back. Parker has a sweet spot for Angelo and children.

Parker and Jarod know too well the repecussions. Jarod can never leave now until Angelo escapes and removes his chip. Mirage, I love this. You're a real wordsmith, too. Thank you for updating. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Uhhh-hmmmmm I love this so much. I need more and more.

Oh I love it! So want to read more now. Please update Peripetia too and Lacuane, Oblivion, and Residuum. I need them all updated. I'm totally jonesing for my pretender fix.

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Bravo this is Top notch!

Cheers!

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So exciting and magnificent! ������

Ahhh uhh bless. The bunnies! It'll always come back to the bunnies � � � � �

I need more! Now!

Please and thank you!

This one is a tearjerker. Angelo. My heart.

Smart of the centre to implant Jarod tho.

That's one way to make him stay.

More please!