Don't stop here please don't ever stop 

Oh please update soon. I love this!

Lyle! Lyle said what now? I mean. Hold up. Is this his redemption arc? I'm here for it if is and I know that be unpopular and you might even disagree but now hear me out ok?

Kyle got his redemption arc.

He broke out of prison, put a cig out on an innocent cab driver's tongue, terrorized Harriet. I don't mind that he terrorized that abusive dad at the gas station but the rest is bad stuff. But he got a redemption arc and became a hero.

Ethan got his redemption arc.

He planted a bomb and was going to murder hundreds of innocent people celebrating peace. But he still got an redemption arc.

So why not Lyle?

Why not?

Do you disagree?

All of the red files are so similar, all trained by the Centre, all deserving of a redemption arc.

But that's just my opinion.

I'll continue to read this wherever it goes. I'm addicted so I can't help it.

You're just that dang good.

More please?

Please continue. You're just like a deep breath of fresh air and I feel blasts of nostalgia mixed with antipication.

You're DAMN amazing!

Omg I need more of this right now! Please hurry

The intrigue is at a rolling book already and the anticipation is almost too much for me.

I need more now.

There must  be  more as I'm dying for more!

Please �� �� �� �� �� �� ��

I love it!

Oh I need more oh and ohh let me tell you I was at a no kings event today in California and I'm 70% sure I saw Michael T Weiss there! But the crowd was between him and me and I was calling out but he just disappeared like Jarod!!!!

I thought you'd appreciate how well he can disappear but don't worry he doesn't seem like Jarod in too many other ways.. can't believe you still have no selfie with him to show me .

You'd really like him 🫥

You could flirt ..you like older men so he's older now.. there you go and liberal..checking your boxes... You could get a great selfie..

And i'd get to see who you are finally!

My friend Sally was there and she said it was definitely him so � � � �

I love it.

I love your story too!

I see and hear Jarod and all of the characters and actors we live when I read you.

You're so awesome 😎 

Please keep writing.

I keep lusting for Jarod as I read this.

It's amazing work.

More!

I hope it's ok I mentioned Michael again...you don't mind. Don't hate on me or yell. I just love him.

And I love you!! 💞

I love all of the little cool touches and continuinity from the original TP television series.

Lyle likes grilled meat.. is that translation. I love it. He starts off by thanking the no one is talking to. Hai is yes. It's Japanese. He was all about the  Yakuza and stuff so that tracks.

God, when I read you it's.. it's like you're really in tune with the series. You are. It's like The Pretender is something you just watched and studied and it's so fresh and this is so fresh and new. You make it all brand new while not changing anything. THere's nostalgia and excitement like the nostalgia is also in real time.

The tv series was already  on a clean path and I love that you're true to it.

Thank you!

Yeah, I remember those organization names.. you created Crimson Sphere and Five-Tier too, for The Return. You used Crimson Sphere in A Heroe's Heart.

I love that you use you them. They seem like legit terrorist organizations to me. So plausible. Why should the Centre be the only baddie on the board.

This is overall perfect. I love that the characters are in character, too. That will always be my favorite thing when I like a story. You go the extra mile for me and also make it plausible, the dialog crisp, the story popping, and seamless transitions. Perfect.

More please.

This is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Lyle telling Parker she isn't gonna pull rank as the older twin is mwahh chef's kiss.Those two. He keeps calling their brother her little brother. Was that intentional? OMG. I hope so.

So many epic moments.

Please don't stop now.

Firstly, m'dear, cleaning house happens and it's a good thing. I like your pretendverse more than the one I'm living in now.

Secondly, Lyle did what now? Is he going good? There must be an ulterior motive. What a powerplay, forcing Parker to shut up and listen because of the surveillance.

Damn. That was intense.

Jarod's going to lose his shit when he finds out Parker hasn't escape, isn't he?

What now? I have no idea how the hell you're going to continue let alone complete this. It's going to be ride, I bet. I'm all buckled in.

You're a hell of a writer. Talented AF.

Please keep writing.

You are needed.

Oomph, I can't get enough of this.

I just...I mean God, your writing is sharp and succinct.

Just what the hell are Jarod and Parker going to do now? How are they going to get out of this mess?

I don't see a way out. Are they never getting out?

Please never stop writing for us �� �� ��