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Title: Chapter 7

So exciting and magnificent! 😁😁😁😁😁😁

Reviewer: Garbiella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/25 12:56 am
Title: Chapter 7

OMG they so obviously love each other dearly omg.

Mirage this is everything and so pretenderY. I need more and more!

Please? 🙏🏼 🙏🏼

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/05/25 05:01 am
Title: Chapter 7

Ahhh uhh bless. The bunnies! It'll always come back to the bunnies 🐇 🐇 🐰 🐰 🐇

I need more! Now!

Please and thank you!

 

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/05/25 03:56 am
Title: Chapter 7

Exquisite 😋

I'm excited to read more.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/05/25 09:03 pm
Title: Chapter 7

This one is a tearjerker. Angelo. My heart.

Smart of the centre to implant Jarod tho.

That's one way to make him stay.

More please!

Reviewer: Jillian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/05/25 03:19 am
Title: Chapter 7

Bravo! 🌹🌹‘🏼 ‘🏼 🙌🏼

It's always unexpected when you write Miss Parker showing the softener side, and essentially confessing her feelings for Jarod, and I don't know why it feels unexpected or out of character for you because you've written that side of her many times. For some reason it seems like you are reluctantly for those two to be together even though they are often together when you write them.

I'm in awe as always, impressed.

You know what you're doing.

I'm not even surprised. I've come to expect this quality from you.

I'm eager to read the next chapter.

Until next time Mirage 🌹’,

Ciao!

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 10:24 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Oooh plot thickens. I love it. I'm fantasizing about Jarod and Parker having sex in the Centre!!!

Please make it so.

Soon!

 

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 06:12 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Whoa baby this is my new favorite novel. I don't call them fics. They are novels.
You've got the characters down pat, the dialogue is perfect, all of it is perfect. You are a wordsmith and an amazing storyteller.
I want more and more.
Please never stop writing.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 05:39 pm
Title: Chapter 7

oh my goodness! You just keep on besting yourself and amazing me, don't you?

The bunnies. It all comes down to the bunnies. Jarod's deja vu. Ohhhhh thank you for the continuity.

I love this.

More please?

Reviewer: valerie_ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 06:36 am
Title: Chapter 7

Squeee! OMG! So many WOWS!

No one writes like this. It's so amazing. YOU are fracking amazing!

"Parker had worked hard for Jarod's anger, had earned it, and had craved his savagery like it was a drug; she was remarkably perturbed that he'd cut it with comfort, laced it with kindness, convincing Parker that one truly could kill with the stuff. Jarod certainly could, if anyone could."

Jarod cutting his anger with comfort FOR HER and lacing his anger with kindness I'm so blown away. Blown all the way away.
More please?

Reviewer: Kayla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 06:17 am
Title: Chapter 7

Oh, Jarod, bless his heart. He always has to purge the sins of his soul. That totally tracks. Thank you for writing about menstruation. More people (men) need to know about this kind of thing. And it's kind of important that girls know about the blood part of sex, those of who didn't rupture a hymen horse back riding that is. Mine was extra tough. I rode horses, bikes, climbed fences, had every reason to not still have a hymen but let me tell that my hymen was nearly impentrable. It took my BF hours to get through it.

So thanks. It's not a fun topic and kind of taboo for some reason but I love you for tackling it and doing it respectfully.

Reviewer: Lizzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 04:33 am
Title: Chapter 7

I was afraid there wouldn't be any emotional Jarod-MP scenes but ohhh Mirage my heart. I love you for this. I love you so much. Your writing is beautiful, so real and plausible. I love it. I want more. Please write as quickly as you can. I know you are writing several stories at once. I don't know how you do it, but I want them all updated and I want more of all them. WRite some new ones too. Thank you for all you do to fix the craving. I still need the fix.

Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 03:43 am
Title: Chapter 7

Holy god Mirage, you've created a monster in me, one that is always starving for more chapters.I'm the biggest Pretender fan, the biggest ever Michael T. Weiss and omfg you wirte them all so perfectly. More, please.

Reviewer: Nooms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 02:47 am
Title: Chapter 7

OMG! She didn't deny it!!! YAAAAAAH! Jarod's like "we know the truth, it's getting harder to conceal it" and OMG Parker didn't deny it. I'm so dead right now I can't EVEN!!!! Oh, I love that Jarod is confessing to Parker that way. He always has to get it out and I LOVE LOVE Freaking LOVE that Parker's opinion is the one he's gonna think about when he dies, so he tells her everything like a guilty cheating husband would. Things like menstruation wouldn't bother Jarod at all. He's THAT man. He's been a doctor, a midwife, he's a genius and he knows it all. First I was like, how does he know Parker knew that Mark was telling the truth, but Jarod knows crap about Parker. JAROD KNOWS PARKER! He knew when she wanted to kill Briggie that it wasn't the unfinished business, HE KNEW IT WAS SOMETHING ELSE. and it was. It was telling Thomas she loved him. He JUST KNEW! He knows her.... but wow I didn't see it coming that he would be Miuna's first man lover and the first time having sex can be a bloody freaking mess.. and I didn't get that memo when I was younger so I was well and proper freaked the freak out..That one's tough. Jarod must feel that his entire life has fallen apart now. He's guilty about Miuna's death, he's gulity about having sex with her while being in love with Parker...He would be. He feels it hard like that. They are both going to be in the Centre. OMG. I can't even wait for more. Hurry and write. Hurry. I love it.

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 01:18 am
Title: Chapter 7

Phew. It begins with the comedic antics of Broots, and becomes serious quickly. Broots is struggling and while still bringing the comedy the reader still senses the gravity of the situation. It feels like you're taking my hand and gently leading me to the darker side, instead of kicking me over. I'm appreciative of the kid gloves right now. Life's so hard and people are so cruel. The things happening politically, the innocent migrants being roughly arrested by ICE and shipped to a prison in a country they've never even been to is breaking my heart. I just hate magaTs right now. IT's their fault.I'm glad I'm not a US citizen. SO many of them are sick.

Reading you is a breath of fresh air. It reminds me of the good things, the good hearts, the good times. Thank you.

I'm enjoying every word.

Reviewer: Kat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/25 11:15 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Exquisite. I love how emotional it became between Jarod and Parker. I still have chill bumps all over me. I feel that so much. It's like watching an episode when I read you. You nail it. Every damn time.

Broots just wanting peace. Damn. He's feeling bad and it wasn't his fault. Parker wasn't going to bring Jarod in until Lyle showed up.That's true to her character. She's never captured him. She's never taken him back to the Centre. SHe can't. She won't do it. I feel so much for her. She's standing there telling Jarod to escape, demanding him to leave and he can't! I'm in tears, Mirage.

Jarod can't leave. He tells Parker to leave, and take her people with her. Oh god. He's trying to be strong, wants to confess his love to her but refuses to burden her.. the way Sydney didn't want to burden Jarod if he could escape.

My heart.But they both know they have feelings for each other. Parker doesn't even deny it when Jarod talks about how Faraijii discovering those feelings.

Poor Angelo. Let him be safe and happy.

I hope to see Sydney soon. He's still recovering from the health issue I presume.

That last part tho. Damn. Jarod won't have to feel guilty for long. He'll be seeing her soon I'm guessing. Can't ever get enough of you. Write faster please.

Reviewer: Sammi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/25 09:52 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Magnifique! More please?


Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/25 09:22 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh, woot! Bravo my dear on another terrific chapter. I'm so freaking excited to see Jarod and Parker in the Centre at the SAME freaking time and they have to stay. She said she isn't going anywhere without her baby brother and if she doesn't know where he is she is definitely staying. I haven't been this excited about a story update since.... ummmmm the last thing you updated lol. You're amazing Thank you. Please never stop. I'm Miss Parker and I'm ordering YOU. Really my first name is Parker so... I ain't lyin'. MORE!

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/25 08:56 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Little lady this is bang on magnificent!Cheers!!

Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/25 08:38 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Solid plotting and story telling. Top notch all the way!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: richie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/25 05:30 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I've got to talk about the characters first off.

Broots is so Broots.

Parker is so Parker.

Jarod is so Jarod.

The Centre is so The Centre.

They're spot on.

It seemed so business as usual until Jarod joined Parker.

The Pretender is home again and I love the big feelings that Broots, Parker, and Jarod have about it.

The way Jarod lost his train of thought because of deja vu was such chef's kiss perfection 😘 and  uh-huh she didn't even tell him that her baby brother is missing and she isn't going anywhere. Those two back together at the Centre. Amazing. I love it. Now I need more please! 🙏🏼

Reviewer: shauna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/25 04:39 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Hey there are you ok? You got me worried 😫 😟.

Please check in with me or Contesasa or anyone in the famdomly please.

Take care babygirl. You are loved. 🌺 🌹



Author's Response:

I apologize for the delay in responding.

I'm okay.

You are loved, too.

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/24 01:29 am
Title: Chapter 6

Holy cows my sista from a fandom mister.

Jarod is our father sort of.

Guess that makes Miss Parker our mums 😂 😂.

You blindsided me with this. Parker is blindsided.

Jarod got blindsided.

Even Lyle seems blindsided!!

I think they would and SHOULD celebrate and crown their treasured assett!!

I'm glad Jarod will be all dressed to nines and treated like a king.

This could be what was in the scrolls.

Jarod chosen to run the Centre.

Do you have theories? Please share with me and the rest of the family class 😍 I pray you will!!

Tell me more about the feral 😺 cats in your garden too please.

 

Keep going.

Please never stop writing and sharing with us. Please.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I apologize for not responding sooner. It's been nearly a year since you reviewed. Jarod could be the fandom father, and who wouldn't want Parker to be their mom? 

I'm afraid I have too many theories to share. They continue to hurl themselves at me.

The feral babies saga. They appear, and observe me for a while, and eventually, I transport them to a vet and/or furever home. That can go down a number of ways, depending on the baby. Sometimes, friendly ferals walk up to me after stalking for a while. One kitten materialized here just before a winter storm, and was starving. He considered running away, but changed his mind and kind of stumble-walked into my hands. Other times I have to put a bowl of food in a carrier (a standard carrier, not a trap that slams shut) and wait for the baby to go inside, and then sprint like hell to quietly close the carrier door before the baby can suspect me of capturing it. I feel terrible when it goes down that way. They have this look of betrayal and they communicate their feelings with a low, humanesque "noooooo."

But they need to be spayed and neutered (whether they agree or not), and they deserve furever homes and proper meals, clean water, beds, castles, cat trees, blankets, toys, scratching posts, healthcare, love, and to be completely fucking spoiled. I do love the transition from "o hell no bitch, I'll stab you to death with my badass bean blades if you even think about touching me" to "ear and chin rubs are FUCKING. AWESOME. *purrs. EVEN. louder.* 

And their humans send me updates and photos, and I don't even have to harrass them about it. I simply invite them to send me updates and like proud parents of honor graduates the humans gleefully do it. I love that enthusiam. Fin.

I will continue scribbling.

I'm glad you're liking it.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/04/24 10:29 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Oi! They've got him. Now they gotta keep him. Sounds like they're on their way to finding a way to keep him... I'm so freaking stoked for this. I'm here for this story big time!

 



Author's Response:

Yes, Jarod's staying put for now. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Leese Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/04/24 07:01 am
Title: Chapter 6

oh my god. I wasn't expecting Jarod to actually stay in the Centre for a while. I'm feeling big sympathy feels for Miss Parker. She doesn't catch a break.

Centre: Jarod escaped, bring him back.

MP: And then I can leave?

Centre: Don't see why not.

*MP brings Jarod back*

Centre: We lied.

I never thought they'd really let her go.
Just hope they aren't gonna try an old fashioned impregnation now that they have Jarod and MP back in the same building. Could just see the Centre saying: they're here, and they're fertile, let's do it.

More please. I love the curve ball you just tossed. You're damn amazing!



Author's Response:

Ha, yes, precisely. They lied. I also hope they aren't going to try an old fashioned impregnation. Ugh. 

There will be more. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Thara Nicole Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/04/24 08:58 pm
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