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Title: Wicked On The Tongue

On the nose title. Jarod's wickedness is very literally on Parker's tongue and throat. I can smell the chlorine smell of sperm from here. Ughh. Women taste so much nicer and they can't explode down a throat like that. It's dark. Just what the label implies. I'll keep reading. It's sad, evil, violent, and a little bit sickening, but it's still interesting and I want to know how it ends.

 Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/25 09:23 pm
Title: Wicked On The Tongue

Ooh, bad Jarod. So evil. More?

 Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/08/25 11:37 pm
Title: Wicked On The Tongue

Really dark and twisted, some grammatical typos and misspellings but nothing to prevent me from reading. The slang is somehow....well you know? It's just that when everything is anatomically correct in the narration in most stories I read about rape it seems more like rape  than just porn...and this is really  rape considering the power dynamics, she's fawning and obligated that's not consent.

I wonder what will happen next.

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/08/25 06:39 pm
Title: Wicked

UuHuh so dark!

 Reviewer: twisted Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/25 06:23 am
Title: Wicked

Darker and darker. Scary.

 Reviewer: Gem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/25 03:54 am
Title: The Wicked Deception

He has manipulated the situation in such a way that Parker has no choice but to trust and stay with him.

Such a DarkJarod move!

Noice!

 Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/03/25 08:47 pm
Title: Wicked

I'm interested in and scared of where this goes next.

Keep writing.

 Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/03/25 06:23 am
Title: These Wicked Choices

Oh snap every choice was hers in this although the elements of coercion exist because she is forced to make the choices or endure bad outcomes.
Jarod designed his game to make her reliant on him.
Well done.
I want more.

 Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/25 03:52 am
Title: Nothing More Wicked

The detail is so nice and yeah dohh Jarod can be bad and he is capable of this..

 Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/25 03:50 am
Title: The Wicked Possessing The Wicked

Ohh so dark.

 Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/25 03:47 am
Title: Even More Wicked

I don't blame her for not obeying him.
She's Parker. She will do her own thing.
I enjoying binge reading you.

 Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/25 03:24 am
Title: These Wicked Games

Being on Jarods bad side like this is never fun for anyone.
Great writing.

 Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/25 03:23 am
Title: Wicked Game

I love the writing voice here. The comparison to a child afraid of a clown is so telling and accurate.
That last sentence. Oomph.
I fear for Parker.

 Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/25 03:20 am
Title: Wicked

Oh. This is intriguing already !

 Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/25 03:17 am
Title: These Wicked Choices

I just read the entire thing. Wow. Soooo dark, but I couldn't stop reading. You are my first btw. My first review. Way to pop it!

 Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/25 09:22 pm
Title: These Wicked Choices

Ouches. This is not easy to read at all. Must have been a pill to write it all out with the stunning detail and medically accurate detail.

Not many people even acknowledge female ejaculation. Only ONE other author here that I'm aware ofh as even referred it, but subtly, by writing "never been so much evidence of orgasm" and I'm miserably misquoting that and parapharsing. It was Mirage I'm certain. Just confirmed that it was Circles Of Hell by Mirage and she implies what happens in her own subtle way and I think someone took issue with even that because people... are gonna take issue. Some people think women don't orgasm at all.

I have to grin any time I read sex here! I love it!

Any time authors break from the pack, chew off the leashes and run feral to do their own thing a reviewer is going to have an issue. 

I'm curious to know what happens next.

 

 Reviewer: Jarod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/25 09:39 pm
Title: Nothing More Wicked

You're really going to go there where few dare to tread because they know some reviewers don't understand how Jarod could be dark... even though Jarod has shown his darkness repeatedly to us.Even MTW said in a commentary that he wanted Jarod to be darker.. and "darkER" means already dark. But explaining this to dim dim people is a wsste of time.

Brave one.

 Reviewer: Jarod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/25 09:29 pm
Title: The Wicked Possessing The Wicked

You are not an Air Supply fan. Got it.

Very fast paced and a lot of drama. Scary Jarod.

THe chapters could be longer. That's about my only issue/

 Reviewer: Jarod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/25 09:27 pm
Title: Even More Wicked

Did NOT expect that. I guess I should have.

What did Air Supply do to you?

Yeah, lol, I hate that song too. Not to point of wanting to puke but yeah, it's bad.

Jarod is so Jarod.

Parker's being drugged and brain-screwed so we can expect this from her.

Delightfully dark.

 Reviewer: Jarod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/25 09:25 pm
Title: These Wicked Games

Oh MY God. Very dark. Getting darker still. The reading is easy and it's like a train. So fast.

 Reviewer: Jarod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/25 09:23 pm
Title: Wicked Game

This is escalating quicker than I thought it might. Well done.

 Reviewer: Jarod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/25 09:20 pm
Title: Wicked

Uh-oh, Parker just made a mistake. Those images of MTW I just saw in here mean bad things happen here and she wiill regret that mistake.

I watched Iowa, the top image, and the Malibu Rd. series, and both Freeway and Freeway 2. Larry, Roger, Larry, guy in a box car, and I dunno how many more times one can man play a rapist or child molester. He does it so well. That's a problem with the best actors. They make it look real.

As for Jarod we know Jarod is bad and can do this. Look what he did to that dude he broke out of a Mexican prison. Sliced him open and stole his kidney wiithout conset...withdrawn consent= screaming no= NO = no consent. Jarod's math on that one doesn't add up. Rape is the same thing. Assault is assault. Surgery without consent is assault. That's just the law. But Jarod breaks laws every time he breathes and impersonates someone so...

I guess I'm buckling in for darkness.

 Reviewer: Jarod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/25 09:16 pm
Title: Wicked

Very dark. I have to wonder how you will resolve this.

 Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/25 08:53 pm
Title: These Wicked Choices

Yeah ‘🏽 Jarod has the mindset that this is revenge and that's the juvenile part of him he won't stop justify any revenge.

He is a psychopath.yiu did this well. I want to know what happens now

Keep going please! 😁 ’🏽

 Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/25 05:56 pm
Title: Nothing More Wicked

I can't stop reading.

 

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Date: 11/03/25 05:52 pm
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